I Really Can't Sleep

I'm afraid this kind of plot will be written later, brothers turn against each other, two people fight, the protagonist and his brother still have some feelings, sit back and watch the protagonist get stronger step by step, and then be crushed and bankrupt by the protagonist using black technology, and the protagonist returns with a green tea bitch. We call a person like the protagonist a scumbag! ! ! I thought it was okay at first glance, but I couldn't stand it further. When the protagonist was hooked, my first reaction was not to call out the number, but to fall into an emotional situation. Especially when I saw the time meter, it really made me want to vomit. I don't know whether she is a green tea bitch or I have something to do with her. I have watched all subsequent developments. The protagonist is just like Nobita Nobita in Doraemon. He uses plug-ins instead of doing real things. He doesn't even use them once. I was shocked. The protagonist's family is very poor. I understand this character's character. Being poor does not mean being stupid, especially in the subsequent development. At first, the relationship with her was not clear, and later the brothers ended up dead. I understand that this is the development of the plot, but it is clearly written in the front, how good is the protagonist to others, and how do you write it later? ? ? If you co-write a supporting role, you don't have human rights, so your family will be destroyed, and you will have to establish a villain route and be crushed by the protagonist? The protagonist is too innocent, you shouldn't put it in the city, you should focus on romance. Author, you need to know what you are good at and what you are not good at. If you can't write, just write something else, okay? There is a lot to write about about urban leveling, pretentiousness, and aura. Please change it. You haven't even established the character of the protagonist. Are you, the author, just writing it for fun? Don't even have an outline?

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Are you a eunuch?

Don't give up, never~~~