I Shocked the Whole World

I don't know why, but I always feel weird looking at it. The protagonist can be said to be independent, or he can be said not to be independent, which is very contradictory. And the question I've always wanted to know is, why don't you just move out? As long as it is a book of this general type, it is independent in all aspects and does a good job, but it will not live alone. Why? Love for a long time? You're kidding me, this is. Just because you changed your soul, another heroine started to have a crush on you? In books like this, the heroine is always in a high position and comes into contact with all kinds of outstanding members of the opposite sex. Just because you like it if you change your soul? If the heroine says that she has some feelings for her predecessor, it's okay, but for heroines like the author, she doesn't have any feelings at all. How could she suddenly have a strange feeling for the protagonist? At most, it's just a difference. Even if the protagonist suddenly behaves amazingly, there won't be much reaction. After all, there are so many people in contact with her.

The book "I Shocked the World" is a system text, but the system is just a tool, mainly the flow of life, and the protagonist is naturally invincible along the way. It is a relaxed and leisurely recreational text. The idea of ​​"I Shocked the World" is not new. It has already been published. I searched and found that there are actually several books. However, the same idea, written by different authors, has completely different feelings. And looking back, not to mention the fantasy books I wrote before, the "Supreme Soldier King", "Super Soldier King" and "Supreme Agent" in recent years are actually not very creative. They mainly write about life. The protagonists in my works are usually relatively mature and stable. Although there are pretense and slaps in the face, they will never be slapped in the face for the sake of being slapped in the face. There will never be a plot like a fight for stepping on a foot, and then killing the whole family. Friends who like to read mindlessly pretentious and cool novels may be disappointed. What I pursue is a plot that is reasonable and reasonable, and the protagonist's EQ and IQ are online, or closer to reality and more down-to-earth. Many friends read the title of the book, or read half a chapter, and feel they have understood everything. They give it one star and criticize a few words. It is difficult for me to understand this mentality. After all, I am also a reader, and I have been an old reader for almost 20 years. I have read tens of millions of books, but I have never cursed any author. The results of everyone's efforts are worthy of respect. You may not like it or despise it, but please do not abuse it. If you like it, support it. If you don't like it, please leave quietly. Even if you really want to say a few words and want to criticize a few words, please read the article and then criticize it. Instead of thinking that "this kind of article is like this, it will definitely be like this later". However, it actually has nothing to do with the plot in the article. I will delete such posts because what you say is your own YY, not written by me. It is meaningless. I don't expect everyone to like it, but I hope everyone will at least read it carefully before commenting, and don't criticize for the sake of criticizing. I will reply to good comments, or add them to the book, or adjust my own thinking. I have written more than 30 chapters so far, but I have read it from the beginning at least 20 times in order to keep the plot smooth and natural and not stiff, so that everyone can like it. After reading the book review, I wrote it casually, everyone can read it, please feel free to do so! If you like it, please add it to your favorites and give me more recommendation votes. That is the greatest support for me! Grateful!

After reading more than ten chapters, the overall feeling is good. There are no cookie-cutter routines. To be honest, it feels good when I first started reading the novel, but the more you read, the more you read. Basically, you know what happens next, which is not attractive. The kind of routine novels I read now are very boring. I hope the author will not write like this and continue to write in the previous style. I believe this will be a good novel.

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In fact, I think Tang Moyu is better in this plot. She has good looks and shares the same sorrows as the protagonist. It seems that the relationship between the protagonist and her is better. Besides, Du Menghan's character determines her destiny. Everything about her is related to the interests of her family. I feel that if the protagonist conflicts with the interests of her family, Du Menghan may not go against the protagonist. So I personally think Tang Cuyu is much better than Du Menghan! ! !

Old 8, can you draw a map for us of the location and orientation of the Donghua Federation, Wukun State, including Black Rock City, and the areas where wild beasts are active? Because sometimes I see some of your east points instead of west or other directions, and I feel a little confused! (Looking from what you wrote, the location of the savage beasts is to the east of the Donghua Federation and Wukun Kingdom, right?) (Also, is there a sea in that area? If so, where is it?) (Also, because you wrote that Wu Kun Country is a wild land in the far east of the mainland! Since it is in the far east of the mainland, there should be no land beyond the east! Otherwise, how can it be called "the far east"???)

While this book has just been opened, I would like to advise the author not to write pretentious and slap-in-the-face articles, as that will make people very disgusted.

The heart level cannot be higher, the routine is too old, standard rebirth, template start, the male protagonist and the female protagonist have no feelings, but the male protagonist can find various reasons to help the female protagonist. As someone who has been in society for a long time, I said that it is too fake. There is no intertwined interests and no emotional constraints. The relationship is just a book and the male protagonist cannot help the female protagonist frequently. If you want to highlight the personality of the male protagonist, then you should write about him helping the disadvantaged and helping the people. Every time I see this old routine, I really hate the male protagonist, and I can't figure out why he can help the female protagonist infinitely. Just because you get a marriage certificate, you have to take responsibility, don't be ridiculous. If the woman has not fulfilled her marital obligations, the man must take on the responsibilities of a man? This kind of writing is only meant to deceive novices and experienced readers who like to read trivial articles. It has no desire for old readers like me to continue reading. The logic at the beginning is illogical, and he keeps helping even though he has no love. If others look down on you, you should also look down on yourself. Everyone has their own temper, unless you are just greedy for other people's bodies. If you write that the heroine weighs 120, is 1.6 Meters tall, has average appearance, and has a poor family, and leaves immediately, then why can't you leave this seemingly excellent woman, and why do you keep helping her? Anyway, I hate finding a lot of excuses to lick the heroine's books. Do men have to hang around the heroine all day long? Can't you start your own business? After reading too many books like this, I feel that my dignity as a man has been trampled on, and it has a bit of a feminist flavor. But the book is overall good, but the routines are too old. Old bookworms said they were tired of reading it and tired of reading it, so they ran away.

I give you four stars. The reason for missing one star is that you wrote too little. Please leave a comment and add me to Ice Pavilion.

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