Qingyun Supreme
About This Novel
A modern young man travels through Zhuxian and begins to seek immortality wholeheartedly.
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Official(45)Scraped 20d ago
What the hell are you writing! The fighter jet in the garbage looks dirty.
I'm speechless
The subject matter is good, but the writing style is really hard to describe in one sentence. It feels like reading an essay, and I am completely speechless.
A person in his 80s or 90s seems to have the mentality of a loser in his twenties. When there was Wu Fangzi, only the Tongtian Peak among the seven peaks of the Qingyun Sect was still in his hands. The other peaks had long been occupied by bandits. Is Wu Fangzi, the Shangqing Realm, so worthless? Still on the Qing Dynasty? Has the author seen Zhu Xian?
There are too many realms, right?
Ye Fan and the others have already attained the Ultimate Dao from scratch. I write them down a bit too lowly. I feel like there is some kind of chaotic realm. The Dream Daluo Golden Immortal can explain it all together. Understand all rules and contain all laws. Countless dimensions of the Hengsha world are everywhere. I have read a book before, and I feel that the step of creating a Dao is okay, but I want to complain, but the author is so awesome at the end that it's not worth reading. It would be better if there were more plots about understanding the laws in the front. Also, the laws in Zhe Tian are also quite desirable. I even had some great people run in and mix around. I suspect that Master Chen Dong might have thought this way when he wrote it. [Emot=default,14/]
They have already written about their cultivation level that exceeds the transformation of the stars, and they reply with "Uh-huh"
When he wrote about his cultivation that surpassed that of the stars and became the master of the universe, he used the word "hmm" in his reply. What do you think, author? Writing such inappropriate words is a sign of complete lack of understanding of communication language, which is only at the level of a high school student.
Don't know why the rating is so high
Don't know why the rating is so high? The writing style is almost non-existent, with a running account style of writing. Don't say things like "if you have the ability to write it yourself" I paid to read it. The author's writing style is too immature and feels childish.
Brainless article
Even more novice than novice, they are all written randomly.
Primary school students' writing style
Running account, forced plot! And it's so childish!
Write at least 600 chapters
I have read a lot of novels, but I rarely read anything with less than 500 chapters. This must be the habit of old bookworms.
childish
Childish plot, you can still imitate it even if you don't remember it
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Official(45)Scraped 20d ago
What the hell are you writing! The fighter jet in the garbage looks dirty.
I'm speechless
The subject matter is good, but the writing style is really hard to describe in one sentence. It feels like reading an essay, and I am completely speechless.
A person in his 80s or 90s seems to have the mentality of a loser in his twenties. When there was Wu Fangzi, only the Tongtian Peak among the seven peaks of the Qingyun Sect was still in his hands. The other peaks had long been occupied by bandits. Is Wu Fangzi, the Shangqing Realm, so worthless? Still on the Qing Dynasty? Has the author seen Zhu Xian?
There are too many realms, right?
Ye Fan and the others have already attained the Ultimate Dao from scratch. I write them down a bit too lowly. I feel like there is some kind of chaotic realm. The Dream Daluo Golden Immortal can explain it all together. Understand all rules and contain all laws. Countless dimensions of the Hengsha world are everywhere. I have read a book before, and I feel that the step of creating a Dao is okay, but I want to complain, but the author is so awesome at the end that it's not worth reading. It would be better if there were more plots about understanding the laws in the front. Also, the laws in Zhe Tian are also quite desirable. I even had some great people run in and mix around. I suspect that Master Chen Dong might have thought this way when he wrote it. [Emot=default,14/]
They have already written about their cultivation level that exceeds the transformation of the stars, and they reply with "Uh-huh"
When he wrote about his cultivation that surpassed that of the stars and became the master of the universe, he used the word "hmm" in his reply. What do you think, author? Writing such inappropriate words is a sign of complete lack of understanding of communication language, which is only at the level of a high school student.
Don't know why the rating is so high
Don't know why the rating is so high? The writing style is almost non-existent, with a running account style of writing. Don't say things like "if you have the ability to write it yourself" I paid to read it. The author's writing style is too immature and feels childish.
Brainless article
Even more novice than novice, they are all written randomly.
Primary school students' writing style
Running account, forced plot! And it's so childish!
Write at least 600 chapters
I have read a lot of novels, but I rarely read anything with less than 500 chapters. This must be the habit of old bookworms.
childish
Childish plot, you can still imitate it even if you don't remember it
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