The Twenty-four Solar Terms Stones of Yueyun Continent

The writing is good, but I need to write more and practice more. Let's put it in a bad way: You've stepped on almost all the traps that newcomers can step on... Western Fantasy has no strong plot direction, the story logic cannot withstand too much scrutiny, the dialogue is immature, the wording is not accurate enough, and most importantly, it is unpleasant! It's not satisfying at all, and the plot is not very attractive, so I actually had a hard time reading it. But I'm a guy, and this is a female-only book, so the rules may be different. The strong girlish style pervades the words, and it's actually quite eye-catching to read. Recommend a target to you - Southern Rose. She is my favorite female online author. Well, actually it feels very nostalgic as it reads very much like the Western fantasy I watched in and outside the classroom when I was a kid.