
About This Novel
Good news: I've traveled through time, and it's a world of beast control. Bad news: The world has been eroded by the mist, and the beast masters and pet beasts are either crazy or on the road to madness. Fortunately, Lin Ran has a purification and bonus point panel, which can purify various negative states in humans and pet animals and obtain corresponding bonus points. Purify [Charm], gain points +1. Purify [Gluttony], gain points +2. Purify [Frenzy], gain points +3. Years later, he became a hero in the world and a legend in the hearts of many people. In this regard, Lin Ran said: "It's not that exaggerated. I'm just an ordinary veterinarian who occasionally treats humans."
What Readers Think
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Official(5)Scraped 18d ago
How to say it? I've read about a dozen of them, and I feel like I'm in a hurry. There is no emotion, no focus, no excitement, it feels a bit like writing a flowing novel. Of course, it's possible that the writing style didn't make me feel it. There is a shortage of books, but you can read it
The ending was a bit too busy, so I didn't enjoy it.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Recommended Recommended Recommended
Settings are too complicated
When I saw the male protagonist opening the business on the first day and then moving into the training ground, there were too many new settings, and there were also advanced ones. It can only be said that the settings are complicated, but they cannot be expressed at all. The reason is very simple, it is too early stage, and they are all the author's own settings. Unlike Pokémon, which has a basic animation background, it is not tiring to read. To be honest, the settings of this book are a bit troublesome to look at. Then the male protagonist's talent was not shown, and even the feedback he gave me when giving treatment to his teammates was too bland, and the excitement was not there. My expectations as a reader were raised, but the scene I wanted to see was not displayed. Maybe I have read too many refreshing articles, and I am not used to this? The last point is that there is no step-by-step logic. It feels like I wrote this and you will see this. For example, the logic I want to see is: I look at the world view and come out, not what the world view is, and then continue the plot, which is too blunt. But it may also be due to the subject matter of the novel. Of course, I am not a novelist. I don't know how to write more smoothly. If I insist on using the novel type to describe this book, it feels a bit like using the writing method of a suspense novel. When writing a beast-control novel, it feels like it is neither good nor bad.
Urgent update! Really well written! This is not enough to see at all
Rating
Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 18d ago
How to say it? I've read about a dozen of them, and I feel like I'm in a hurry. There is no emotion, no focus, no excitement, it feels a bit like writing a flowing novel. Of course, it's possible that the writing style didn't make me feel it. There is a shortage of books, but you can read it
The ending was a bit too busy, so I didn't enjoy it.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Recommended Recommended Recommended
Settings are too complicated
When I saw the male protagonist opening the business on the first day and then moving into the training ground, there were too many new settings, and there were also advanced ones. It can only be said that the settings are complicated, but they cannot be expressed at all. The reason is very simple, it is too early stage, and they are all the author's own settings. Unlike Pokémon, which has a basic animation background, it is not tiring to read. To be honest, the settings of this book are a bit troublesome to look at. Then the male protagonist's talent was not shown, and even the feedback he gave me when giving treatment to his teammates was too bland, and the excitement was not there. My expectations as a reader were raised, but the scene I wanted to see was not displayed. Maybe I have read too many refreshing articles, and I am not used to this? The last point is that there is no step-by-step logic. It feels like I wrote this and you will see this. For example, the logic I want to see is: I look at the world view and come out, not what the world view is, and then continue the plot, which is too blunt. But it may also be due to the subject matter of the novel. Of course, I am not a novelist. I don't know how to write more smoothly. If I insist on using the novel type to describe this book, it feels a bit like using the writing method of a suspense novel. When writing a beast-control novel, it feels like it is neither good nor bad.
Urgent update! Really well written! This is not enough to see at all













