I Can Trade Everything

Let's not talk about how you beat Accelerator. It's really weird that you broke your reflexes out of nowhere. And you can equip Aiwass and Aleister with just a few doomsday weapons? The fire on the right can only shatter the stars with one blow. Even the archangel who descends from the gods can destroy the surface of the earth with one finger, and make the earth self-destruct with just one thought. Your fighting power is really great. The magnetic field rotates at every turn, and the magnetic field rotates enough to pass one side of the platinum wing. Not to mention the likes of demons, masters, and Lao Deng. 😐If you look at a virus and see if it dies in seconds, it's not a big problem at all, it's just the extinction of organisms.

A month and a half ago, not long after the book started, maybe this is a common problem of the author? Write carefully before it is put on the shelves, and write casually after it is put on the shelves. Can you fool one or the other? After seeing today, I gave up. Chat groups, worlds, shops, each type has a different focus. For example: in the universe, the protagonist grows up world by world; in the chat group, the protagonist interacts and grows with the group friends; in the store, in fact, like the chat group, it interacts and grows with the store. Of course, I'm not saying that it's not good to go to the world of group friends or the world of store friends! However, the types are different and the focus is different! Want to interact, communicate, and grow in a different world? Yes, yes, but you must have superb plot arrangement skills and vivid and profound writing skills! Otherwise, just write and write, just like now, wandering around in a certain world for dozens of chapters without returning to the store, okay? (Mainly because the writing is not good-looking) Novice authors (failed authors?) Should write well and practice hard! Pick up the simple ones first and write them! Don't think about a novel all day long to achieve platinum/supreme godhood! Isn't it better to practice writing a few million-word books than to write a novel with a few million words?

The story is good, but the author doesn't need to keep emphasizing how handsome the protagonist is, and he doesn't need to emphasize it every time he mentions the protagonist.

Chat group, store flow, transaction flow, Zhutian flow, etc., If it is a two-dimensional theme, then the most interesting thing for readers is that most of them want to see the protagonist, meet the two-dimensional characters face to face and play with them face to face. For example: Yakumo Purple calls Zima in front of her, Misaka calls her Paojie in front of her, Yukino calls Hiraino, etc.! So, for now, this is really not very good at writing! A bit boring. Keep up the good work.