Starting from Yandang Mountain

Aren't you just fooling around like this? Really. It sounds a bit messy.

Is it impossible to write without Guo Jing? It's all Guo Jing's part. Who is the protagonist? If you want to write about sects, just write about sects. Don't focus on Guo Jing.

The writing is okay, but some of the author's special codes are about stallions and so on, which makes me feel sick even when I read them.

What the hell, they actually arranged for Pig Feet and Huang Rong to fall in love. When Wang Chongyang was alive, Pig Feet was 18 or 19 years old. After Wang Chongyang died, the old naughty boy went to hide the scriptures and met Huang Laoxie and his wife. Huang Rong was not yet born, and Guo Jing and Huang Rong met Huang Rong when they were 17 or 18 years old. This means that Pig Feet is now almost 40 years old. The average age of ancient people is over 50 years old. Pig Feet is already a middle-aged uncle in his late 40s. How is it possible for Huang Rong to like him?

The protagonist, the Holy Mother, can't move as long as she sees a woman. When she was a teenager, she compared herself to Wang Chongyang. How dare you? Even the other four masters dare not say it. Xiao Bai ruined the original work and persuaded him to quit!

The main character, junior brother Wang Chongyang, married Huang Yaoshi's daughter and got himself demoted a generation for nothing. Why is Guo Jing doing so much after talking about it?

The most disgusting phenomenon when reading martial arts novels is that the protagonist destroys the original record after receiving the inheritance. Unfortunately, the protagonist is still a Taoist priest, and he has read so many Taoist and Buddhist scriptures. It is because of people like the protagonist, or people like the author, that many things left by our ancestors have been lost.

Chance will not snatch women from other places and do it like bandits.

It is said that a year ago, they were discussing with Wang Chongyang, and a year later they met the Black and White Demons. Where did they get the Nine Yin Scriptures before Wang Chongyang died? How could they become the Black and White Demons without the Nine Yin Scriptures? Instead, the Black and White Demons wandered in the Central Plains for a few years before they came to the desert, and they fled to the desert after being hunted, including several years. This is so wrong.

In the Condor Trilogy, the Quanzhen Sect is the largest Taoist sect in the world, not to mention the Zhengyi Sect in the south. The Wudang Sect in Yitian is the only two major sects as famous as Shaolin. Are you telling me that the Taoist sect is declining?