I Am the First Generation Human Race in the Prehistoric Times
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One hundred years after Saint Nuwa created human beings, Xia Yu traveled through the ancient world and became the first generation of human beings, even assuming the identity of a tribal leader. At this time, the second ancestor of the human race had just emerged, the Three Pure Ones had not yet become saints, and the journey to the west had not yet begun. The human race had no way to practice, so they could only rely on the protection of the witch clan and struggle to survive. See how Xia Yu leads the Xia tribe to rise in the heavens... New book: Immortality: Beginning with the Master of Weapon Refining, please collect it and read it!
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I will try my best to reply to normal comments. If you have any opinions, you can discuss them with me.
Writing is okay
I think preaching in the dungeon is a bit poisonous. It would be better if the plug-in can analyze the skills, and then plunder the martial arts and knowledge in the dungeon, and then repair it. Even if the skills are taught, the skills must be taught quickly and the protagonist can control them. In this journey through the heavens, plundering is almost the main method, character creation is also a problem, and there is no sense of substitution when reading, which is said to be good writing.
There is too much content in the dungeon world, and it feels like the number of words is too low. It is recommended that you write less in the dungeon world. Take Dragon Snake as an example. He wrote more than a hundred chapters on a secret method to open his body! This is the early stage Dragon Snake world that has not yet opened up a new path. If it were a complete Dragon Snake world, I wouldn't say much, but this is the early stage Dragon Snake world! I wrote more than a hundred chapters! Although the content is rich and the battle details are in place, are you sure the author is writing about prehistoric times? If it hadn't been written about traveling through prehistoric times in the early stages, I would have thought the protagonist had traveled through the world of dragons and snakes!
I'm convinced that a Grand Master is equal to an Earth Immortal? ? ? ? ? Damn, that's weird
By the way, is it too inaccurate for the prehistoric Earth Immortals to use tons to measure combat effectiveness? Isn't it something else? So what if you have hundreds of tons? Can you catch up with the Earth Immortal? Can you hit it? Real chickens are measured in tons
Do you know why there are fewer and fewer people? The writing is a bit slow. A world in Dragon Snake Romance without the Emperor of the Galaxy has more than seventy chapters and is not finished yet. Such a world should not exceed fifty chapters at most. The plot is too slow.
a supreme world
Go to the small world and waste time! In prehistoric times, even a newborn child could destroy the small world!
Tell the truth.
You are a prehistoric human race, even if you don't cultivate your physique, you are infinitely better than seeing a god and not being evil.
He has already traveled to the prehistoric times, and he still has to travel to a lower world to find skills.
Too much nonsense, the plot moves very slowly
There are so many creative skills written, it looks so boring, and the first and second level skills are completely useless. The skills of the acquired and innate realms are delayed for so long, and after the innate realm is the Qi training and foundation building phase... In the ancient world, every person is a Jinxian Da Luo Jinxian. The male protagonist is so boring to death because he spends so much time playing in the mud.
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Official(55)Scraped 21d ago
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I will try my best to reply to normal comments. If you have any opinions, you can discuss them with me.
Writing is okay
I think preaching in the dungeon is a bit poisonous. It would be better if the plug-in can analyze the skills, and then plunder the martial arts and knowledge in the dungeon, and then repair it. Even if the skills are taught, the skills must be taught quickly and the protagonist can control them. In this journey through the heavens, plundering is almost the main method, character creation is also a problem, and there is no sense of substitution when reading, which is said to be good writing.
There is too much content in the dungeon world, and it feels like the number of words is too low. It is recommended that you write less in the dungeon world. Take Dragon Snake as an example. He wrote more than a hundred chapters on a secret method to open his body! This is the early stage Dragon Snake world that has not yet opened up a new path. If it were a complete Dragon Snake world, I wouldn't say much, but this is the early stage Dragon Snake world! I wrote more than a hundred chapters! Although the content is rich and the battle details are in place, are you sure the author is writing about prehistoric times? If it hadn't been written about traveling through prehistoric times in the early stages, I would have thought the protagonist had traveled through the world of dragons and snakes!
I'm convinced that a Grand Master is equal to an Earth Immortal? ? ? ? ? Damn, that's weird
By the way, is it too inaccurate for the prehistoric Earth Immortals to use tons to measure combat effectiveness? Isn't it something else? So what if you have hundreds of tons? Can you catch up with the Earth Immortal? Can you hit it? Real chickens are measured in tons
Do you know why there are fewer and fewer people? The writing is a bit slow. A world in Dragon Snake Romance without the Emperor of the Galaxy has more than seventy chapters and is not finished yet. Such a world should not exceed fifty chapters at most. The plot is too slow.
a supreme world
Go to the small world and waste time! In prehistoric times, even a newborn child could destroy the small world!
Tell the truth.
You are a prehistoric human race, even if you don't cultivate your physique, you are infinitely better than seeing a god and not being evil.
He has already traveled to the prehistoric times, and he still has to travel to a lower world to find skills.
Too much nonsense, the plot moves very slowly
There are so many creative skills written, it looks so boring, and the first and second level skills are completely useless. The skills of the acquired and innate realms are delayed for so long, and after the innate realm is the Qi training and foundation building phase... In the ancient world, every person is a Jinxian Da Luo Jinxian. The male protagonist is so boring to death because he spends so much time playing in the mud.
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