Prehistoric: the Reborn Blood-winged Black Mosquito Takes over the Sea of blood
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Lin Xia traveled through the wilderness and became a blood-winged black mosquito, the first mosquito in the world, and a mosquito Taoist. He is born with the ability to master the two avenues of Devouring and Blood. What? Is Styx still gestating at this time? Why don't you go get him? Kill the River Styx, dominate the Sea of Blood, and find a supreme path! !
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Official(8)Scraped 24d ago
I always feel like you'll collapse if you write like this
I don't know if this is my misunderstanding. I always feel that you didn't write the outline well, or you didn't write the outline at all! I didn't know that you later wrote according to the Zhengtong Honghuang script! That is, the Three Emperors after the Lich, the Conferred Gods after the Three Emperors and Journey to the West! (*/㉨＼*) I feel that if you write like this, if your writing style is better, if you can't finish it well, the book will collapse Because there is a system. It would be much better if you start writing from Long Han or the previous fierce beast, or simply don't use that system! Because I have seen one before ~ I read one after another. Although he rationalized the system in about 140 chapters, that is, it was scrapped, but his early writing was so exciting that the book was finished in only 201 chapters. Basically, it was scrapped after Hunyuan. I guess he couldn't write it himself. I didn't read it in detail after that, I just looked at the table of contents! The book is called "In the Great Desolation, Gou Wanshou Mountain, Stable and Unable to Come Out" Or you can control the rhythm and write about the astronomy after the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, or the layout before and after the Conferment of Gods, and directly write original creations about other worlds, such as the world's ascending dimension (the Great Thousand World, the Eternal World, the Infinite World, the Hongmeng World), etc., And then set them in sequence. Counting two or three opponents and allies is best not to be a one-man show or to copy other people's homework ("▔㉨▔) In fact, I personally think that the Zhutian copywriting of (Wu Tomb) is good. If your writing style is good, it will be fine. If it is not grand, just write smaller. Also, do you have any misunderstandings about Creation Jade Butterfly? It's no problem for you to write down his complete records of the Great Law! However, the jade butterflies created by the prehistoric civilization basically have one basic function, and that is to help people realize enlightenment! Did you forget, or didn't you think about it at all? But there is one thing I think you wrote very well, that is, in the gourd section, I very much support the statement that the seven gourds are embryos! I'll give it three stars for the time being. The writing is okay. Let's put it on the bookshelf and read it first. As an aside, I see that many people are following the trend~(￣▽￣~)~Why do I feel that no one copied the copywriting of Wu Tomb and wrote a book
Are you a eunuch? Long time no update.
Rubbish that only knows how to practice
No layout? If there is no conspiracy, why should I watch Ancient Times? I might as well watch mythology. The protagonist says that he is not a human being and still uses the name of his previous life. You say that he is not a human race. You want to call him Mosquito Taoist instead of Lin Xia. What is the point of practicing all the time?
Why not update? Update quickly, update quickly
not bad
At first, maybe it was because the author had just written it, and I felt that the writing style was still a little lacking, but then it gradually improved, maybe because the writing style improved. At first, I felt that the subject matter was good, and I endured a bit of poisonousness while reading it. In the end, I found that it was not bad, and the points of the refreshing writing were just right, without being too over the top. Come on If there is still potential, just follow your idea. Most of these prehistoric novels are finished when they reach Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian or they go to the heavens. I hope it can give us a different experience. The in-depth description of chaos in the back and the worldview slowly deriving from chaos with prehistoric times as the fulcrum is still very interesting. (Also, every time I think of the main character's body as a 🦟, I get goosebumps.)
Are you serious about seizing the body of Styx?
In the prehistoric world, you are stronger than the opponent in seizing a body, and some also have luck protection. There is something wrong with your setting. Also, mosquitoes really feel uncomfortable when choosing characters. It will be difficult for you to choose a character when you have a lot of spiritual roots in prehistoric characters.
This prehistoric novel is pretty good so far.
I hope to write something different, not all the same
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Official(8)Scraped 24d ago
I always feel like you'll collapse if you write like this
I don't know if this is my misunderstanding. I always feel that you didn't write the outline well, or you didn't write the outline at all! I didn't know that you later wrote according to the Zhengtong Honghuang script! That is, the Three Emperors after the Lich, the Conferred Gods after the Three Emperors and Journey to the West! (*/㉨＼*) I feel that if you write like this, if your writing style is better, if you can't finish it well, the book will collapse Because there is a system. It would be much better if you start writing from Long Han or the previous fierce beast, or simply don't use that system! Because I have seen one before ~ I read one after another. Although he rationalized the system in about 140 chapters, that is, it was scrapped, but his early writing was so exciting that the book was finished in only 201 chapters. Basically, it was scrapped after Hunyuan. I guess he couldn't write it himself. I didn't read it in detail after that, I just looked at the table of contents! The book is called "In the Great Desolation, Gou Wanshou Mountain, Stable and Unable to Come Out" Or you can control the rhythm and write about the astronomy after the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, or the layout before and after the Conferment of Gods, and directly write original creations about other worlds, such as the world's ascending dimension (the Great Thousand World, the Eternal World, the Infinite World, the Hongmeng World), etc., And then set them in sequence. Counting two or three opponents and allies is best not to be a one-man show or to copy other people's homework ("▔㉨▔) In fact, I personally think that the Zhutian copywriting of (Wu Tomb) is good. If your writing style is good, it will be fine. If it is not grand, just write smaller. Also, do you have any misunderstandings about Creation Jade Butterfly? It's no problem for you to write down his complete records of the Great Law! However, the jade butterflies created by the prehistoric civilization basically have one basic function, and that is to help people realize enlightenment! Did you forget, or didn't you think about it at all? But there is one thing I think you wrote very well, that is, in the gourd section, I very much support the statement that the seven gourds are embryos! I'll give it three stars for the time being. The writing is okay. Let's put it on the bookshelf and read it first. As an aside, I see that many people are following the trend~(￣▽￣~)~Why do I feel that no one copied the copywriting of Wu Tomb and wrote a book
Are you a eunuch? Long time no update.
Rubbish that only knows how to practice
No layout? If there is no conspiracy, why should I watch Ancient Times? I might as well watch mythology. The protagonist says that he is not a human being and still uses the name of his previous life. You say that he is not a human race. You want to call him Mosquito Taoist instead of Lin Xia. What is the point of practicing all the time?
Why not update? Update quickly, update quickly
not bad
At first, maybe it was because the author had just written it, and I felt that the writing style was still a little lacking, but then it gradually improved, maybe because the writing style improved. At first, I felt that the subject matter was good, and I endured a bit of poisonousness while reading it. In the end, I found that it was not bad, and the points of the refreshing writing were just right, without being too over the top. Come on If there is still potential, just follow your idea. Most of these prehistoric novels are finished when they reach Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian or they go to the heavens. I hope it can give us a different experience. The in-depth description of chaos in the back and the worldview slowly deriving from chaos with prehistoric times as the fulcrum is still very interesting. (Also, every time I think of the main character's body as a 🦟, I get goosebumps.)
Are you serious about seizing the body of Styx?
In the prehistoric world, you are stronger than the opponent in seizing a body, and some also have luck protection. There is something wrong with your setting. Also, mosquitoes really feel uncomfortable when choosing characters. It will be difficult for you to choose a character when you have a lot of spiritual roots in prehistoric characters.
This prehistoric novel is pretty good so far.
I hope to write something different, not all the same
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