She Shocked the World after Marrying a Repairman

I saw the recommended activities last night, and then I saw it at 5 a. M., And then I got up this morning and saw the update. I think the writing style is okay, the description is also very delicate, and the general setting is also good. It is my favorite type. [Emot=default,12/]But! ! ! What we are saying is, can you write less stupid stuff? It really affects your mood and reading experience. For example, that Pu Xin man! It's really disgusting🤢. Did a passing dog glance at you and you think he likes you? (Although this also shows that the author's writing skills are good, I still can't accept it.) And the male protagonist's subordinates, why are they so brainless? Don't you need to keep your brain as a legacy? You can be considered a master in medical skills. He has no ability to judge at all and relies entirely on intuition and imagination. How do you survive until now? The male protagonist has so many enemies, and it's up to you to instigate rebellion! There are also those group of passers-by who have the same personality, are inexplicable, and are self-righteous. Whether others are good or not is none of your business. They think about spreading rumors about others every day. You have nothing to do, right? Is it difficult to admit that others are good? ! [Emot=default,01/]Finally, I hope the author will take a look at the readers' suggestions and write less about the passers-by A, B, C, and D who are forced to become intelligent by their insiders. I won't mention the ones that appeared in the front. I hope that the new characters in the back will not have the same personality, and they can really tie Q! [Emot=default,84/] (The above only represents my personal thoughts 💡) If there is any offense, it is intentional hahahaha My spirit is very good, my spirit is very good, my spirit is very good, my spirit is very good, my spirit is very good Oh my God, I'm so good, my mother is so good! What's going on, crazy? Everyone will die, pretend to be normal. Who will see? Everyone will die. Pretend to be normal. Who will see? What's wrong? Everyone will die. Pretend to be normal. Who will see?

I came from the Chu Jin book, because the author wrote a different one, and the result was very disappointing😞. I even wondered if the author took the one he wrote before and published it? There is no logic at all. The heroine is reborn, and she just said that in one year, she will become someone that no one can reach. Then the main plot should be that the heroine takes her mother to the top of life, and slaps her in all kinds of ways... In the end, almost all the people have malicious thoughts to push the heroine and develop the plot. There is no series of plans of the heroine, and the character is not clear, and she went to the hero's repair shop? The heroine is almighty, I don't understand what she is doing there? There is also no in-depth explanation of the heroine's mother's growth line, right? At least there is a climax of change?

The storyline is really good, I'm not bragging. It's just that the characterization is much, much worse, and most of them are uncomfortable to complain about. Regardless of whether they are men, women, old or young, they are all arrogant, trustworthy, and have no ability to distinguish. No matter what, if I step on you hard and write the same image, it will be very mindless. It cannot highlight the agility of the characters and cannot give them soul.

Most of the characters that have appeared so far are malicious towards the heroine. I don't understand where all the malice comes from. They feel bad about the heroine even though they have never met her. There are too many inner activities of the supporting characters and they are all too narcissistic. I really can't stand it after reading more than 70 chapters.

It's a pity. It has a very good structure and a very novel idea. The heroine and the supporting characters are both reborn. I thought it would be a peak showdown, but I was disappointed. The female supporting character's IQ is worrisome and has no characteristics. The female protagonist is too Buddhist and was slapped in the face at the school anniversary. The rest of the time has no sense of existence. The male protagonist has no emotional intelligence at all. He chases his wife in the crematorium and has no good men. Is a doctor's subordinate, which lowers the male protagonist's vision and ability to serve. The other characters' personalities are basically the same. One group unconditionally praises the female protagonist, while the other unconditionally devalues the female protagonist. The characters have too many inner activities and are very narcissistic. They are all unreasonable fantasies, which are not in line with ordinary people's thoughts at all. The plot of the story is too slow, and the inner monologue is too long, which deviates from the story itself.

The main plot of the story is actually quite good, as long as all the supporting characters on the heroine's side are not imagining the emperor, Yazi, who doesn't seem to have a normal brain, Lin Guimei and her daughter are imagining that the heroine, mother and daughter are country bumpkins who cheated and were kept and lost their business, and the male protagonist's mother shows off her brain. The mother-in-law and her daughter are trying to get close to Mrs. Lu for money, Fang Hongyu thinks that Mu Bocheng loves her, the Mu family and his grandson think that Lin Guixiang deliberately seduces Mu Bocheng, and Qiao Ran in the beginning thinks that the heroine cheats and bullies... There are too many similar plots, which makes people feel heartbroken. The characters of these characters are too thin, and everyone is smart. I can't see things that are obvious and obvious. I don't listen to them and can't see them. What I think is that the facts are correct .

It's so long-winded, almost every chapter is about the narcissistic inner activities of irrelevant people.

Why did you change the title of the book? The original title of the book seemed to be a story about the heroine not surrendering to fate and becoming bigger and stronger. After changing it, at first glance it seemed that she was relying on others...

Personally, I feel that except for the male and female protagonist, Grandma Lu and the male protagonist's subordinate, everyone else has become wise

There are a lot of confusing names, and the content is very good, but too many typos will still dissuade some readers. It will take a lot of hard work to correct it.