Prehistoric: Steady Development Since Becoming a Disciple of Tongtian
by Bread Fairy
About This Novel
Reborn in the ancient world, Zhang Yun became one of the human races created by Nuwa. It was just when I was preaching in the human race. He had no luck, and he was not a protagonist of the era or a son of great calamity. He just wanted to live forever and hug Lao Tzu's thigh. Until, I recommended him to Tongtian as a disciple... And thus a sneaky Jie Jiao was born. Under the leadership of Zhang Yun, Jie Jiao worked hard not to be involved in cause and effect (he would scatter the enemy's ashes), be quiet and do nothing (if those who are looking for trouble are saved, there would be no action), and would never step into danger easily. "I have repeatedly emphasized that it was not me who made the teachers crooked, they were crooked to begin with!" Zhang Yun said angrily.
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Official(6)Scraped 22d ago
The first part is quite nice, but the second part is a bit confusing. Why aren't Houtu and Pingxin the same person? It feels weird, and where is my mount, the Blue Ox with flat legs? Moreover, the realm of cultivation is very vague. How can one become a heavenly immortal after passing through a true immortal?
Be smart, can a fairy come out of the mountain? Can we still go to Buzhou Mountain? The bodies are cold on the road
The main character is like an idiot and wants the Witch Clan to prove that he is a Witch Clan and really makes a staff.
Why does this opening look so much like a book I read? Even the magic weapon I borrowed is the same.
What is the difference between the opening of your book and the Black-Hearted Cangtian White Crane? Don't borrow too much from it. The opening is almost the same.
An ordinary book, barely readable
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Official(6)Scraped 22d ago
The first part is quite nice, but the second part is a bit confusing. Why aren't Houtu and Pingxin the same person? It feels weird, and where is my mount, the Blue Ox with flat legs? Moreover, the realm of cultivation is very vague. How can one become a heavenly immortal after passing through a true immortal?
Be smart, can a fairy come out of the mountain? Can we still go to Buzhou Mountain? The bodies are cold on the road
The main character is like an idiot and wants the Witch Clan to prove that he is a Witch Clan and really makes a staff.
Why does this opening look so much like a book I read? Even the magic weapon I borrowed is the same.
What is the difference between the opening of your book and the Black-Hearted Cangtian White Crane? Don't borrow too much from it. The opening is almost the same.
An ordinary book, barely readable
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