Prehistoric Creation

This sister is a failure, disgusting as hell. If she could be removed, it would be a bit better.

In this cultivation of immortality, shouldn't we accept apprentices, boys, mounts, etc.? What the hell is taking in a sister? What do you think, author? ? And this sister is so annoying. What does this line do? Can you write? ? ?

To be honest, this book is as good as the Ghost Exorcist Taoist I have read.

It's not that the author's writing is not good. On the contrary, the writing is very good, but this sister is a bit unbearable for readers. I have been reading books for six years, and I have never seen a sister controlled to this extent. I am just a carp. I am lucky enough to let the protagonist accept his sister. I am not low-key, and I want to avoid provoking enemies for my brother. He provokes one in the east and one in the west. The protagonist is not that powerful, right? Therefore, the main character should be changed, and I will publish another Honghuangliu book in the future. In short, it would be better if this sister did not exist. Although the book has been completed, I still have a big suggestion for the author. I will say it here. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Shui Bing Ling is so disgusting. I can't even stand it. I suggest the author remove it. First give 1.

I am also a talented person and have read so many chapters. Personally, I think Shui Bingling is too disgusting, greedy and loves to confuse right and wrong. If there was no protagonist, he would have died long ago.

The Chaos Demon God must have attained the realm of a saint. Besides, you pig's feet were born in Hongmeng's pre-judgment period. Aren't most of the Honghuangliu novels published in Hongmeng Breaking and Chaos? How many eras are there between the beginning of chaos and the birth of Kaitian by Pangu?? One era is 129,600 years ago?

I traveled through Hongmeng before it was opened, and after seeing more than two hundred chapters, I haven't become a saint yet. Damn it, this is such a waste, isn't it? How did the author write that everyone else has become a saint, but the protagonist has not yet become a saint, and he still claims to be a god?

As soon as the protagonist comes out. Wow, before the sky was opened, it was so awesome, Tianzun. Okay, the more I write about it, the more awesome it becomes. First, it's as awesome as Hongjun. Okay, no problem. Later, it was written that he was the same as a saint, and then he became even more cheating. He was just like Hongjun before he became a saint. After he became a saint, even Yuan was disobedient and provocative to him. Well, I was secretly angry at the protagonist to comfort myself, snorting and being cold. Protagonist: Well, I just don't want to go, why, I am a brother-in-law of Pangu, so be generous and forgive him. Wow, that's awesome, come on, it's so well written, I'm optimistic about you, don't give up, we will encourage you to become da sha bi

Overall, this book is really awkward to read. The character of the protagonist is simply an ordinary person. He is not even qualified to be a cultivator, let alone become an immortal or a saint. If the protagonist removes those things in mythology, it will be an article about ordinary people living their lives, and it has nothing to do with the character of a cultivator.