
After the Warrior
by Ouyang Jie
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The protagonist is a descendant of the ancient god of war. Let's see how he awakens his ancient abilities.
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Let me make some suggestions... First In general, try not to make your writing too long. Because I really don't have the patience to read it all... If the article is too long, it can easily arouse readers' resistance. So I suggest the author try to divide it into the following paragraphs... Sectioning is beneficial and harmless, believe me, readers without sectioning can easily confuse the content... (Quietly: This is my experience after being complained about. Ahem... I'm going too far...) Second That is, the number of words in each chapter should not vary too much. This can easily give people a sense of gap... Just like lining up for physical education class, This is generally done by height, right? If the height difference is too big, One high and one low wouldn't look very nice, right? Therefore, try not to have too much difference in word count between chapters. A difference of a few hundred words once or twice is no big deal. But... Try to keep the word count within about three hundred words. Sometimes it can be a little longer, But don't suddenly make too much of a difference. Emmm... That's all my suggestions for now... I'll think of it next time... Of course, Whether you accept my suggestion or not is the author's own decision... Maybe you think my suggestion is not good, emmmm... That's it...
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Official(1)Scraped 14d ago
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Let me make some suggestions... First In general, try not to make your writing too long. Because I really don't have the patience to read it all... If the article is too long, it can easily arouse readers' resistance. So I suggest the author try to divide it into the following paragraphs... Sectioning is beneficial and harmless, believe me, readers without sectioning can easily confuse the content... (Quietly: This is my experience after being complained about. Ahem... I'm going too far...) Second That is, the number of words in each chapter should not vary too much. This can easily give people a sense of gap... Just like lining up for physical education class, This is generally done by height, right? If the height difference is too big, One high and one low wouldn't look very nice, right? Therefore, try not to have too much difference in word count between chapters. A difference of a few hundred words once or twice is no big deal. But... Try to keep the word count within about three hundred words. Sometimes it can be a little longer, But don't suddenly make too much of a difference. Emmm... That's all my suggestions for now... I'll think of it next time... Of course, Whether you accept my suggestion or not is the author's own decision... Maybe you think my suggestion is not good, emmmm... That's it...










