
Siheyuan: the Long Road of Life That Started in May 2nd
by Everyone Needs To Be Reasonable
About This Novel
Shi Yi traveled through time. The good news is that it has not traveled through time to the twin pupils of the same name, and it is not a fantasy world full of dangers. The bad news is that in the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China, when food and clothing were scarce, I still had a younger sister to support. Fortunately, the benefits of time travel have arrived. It is a system with a grand name, but except for the "newbie gift pack", the function of the system seems to be...
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Official(22)Scraped 20d ago
I don't understand a bit
After reading the first chapter, the protagonist exchanged two bottles of polar bear constitution potion. After drinking it, he will gradually gain the strength and characteristics of a polar bear, and he will be taller and stronger than others. Then after drinking one bottle, he gave the remaining bottle to his sister. I don't understand this operation a bit. What do you think? Do you want to turn your sister into a Dongbei Yu sister type? Moreover, my sister is only six years old and has two hundred kilograms of strength after drinking it. I am not afraid that when my sister is playing with other children, she will have conflicts and then punch them and burp them
My humble opinion The plug-in is not retro, but you give people a 2005 feeling Depending on the situation, there may be multiple heroines, but not studs, but your character description is too stereotypical. There is an issue with age. The twelve-year-old you set is too abstract, although times are indeed different. There is also a problem with the background era. It is 52 years and the Marriage Law is two years old. It is better to set it to 48 years.
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Fish costs 1,800 yuan per pound! So expensive! There are other data! Awesome! I don't know how I got it!
Wouldn't it be nice to exchange it for a marrow cleansing pill or practice some exercises? If that doesn't work, the whole super serum will do. Just exchanged it for the polar bear gene potion, and ended up never leaving the polar bear.
This is because I am afraid that Mrs. Jia and Zhang will die and will not be able to write it down.
I read that book with more than 200,000 words. It said that the protagonist was He Yuzhu, and his mother was still alive, and his father didn't read that book. The latest chapter of the book said that the protagonist joined the army, and then sent the military enlistment certificate and the certificate of the glorious home to the protagonist's family! The book Siheyuan written by your colleague is also very consistent with the plot of your book. I personally recommend you to learn from this plot. Write a plot of this to avoid having to write a runaway plot later. After all, the heroine of your book should be Chen Xueru.
, I haven't watched it yet. I'll give you a few tickets. If I don't send you a night shift, I'll basically listen to two to three hundred chapters in one night.
The author should update it soon ah ah ah ah ah
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Twelve years old was changed to eighteen years old.
You described a little girl as having the strength of two hundred pounds. Do you understand the concept?
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Official(22)Scraped 20d ago
I don't understand a bit
After reading the first chapter, the protagonist exchanged two bottles of polar bear constitution potion. After drinking it, he will gradually gain the strength and characteristics of a polar bear, and he will be taller and stronger than others. Then after drinking one bottle, he gave the remaining bottle to his sister. I don't understand this operation a bit. What do you think? Do you want to turn your sister into a Dongbei Yu sister type? Moreover, my sister is only six years old and has two hundred kilograms of strength after drinking it. I am not afraid that when my sister is playing with other children, she will have conflicts and then punch them and burp them
My humble opinion The plug-in is not retro, but you give people a 2005 feeling Depending on the situation, there may be multiple heroines, but not studs, but your character description is too stereotypical. There is an issue with age. The twelve-year-old you set is too abstract, although times are indeed different. There is also a problem with the background era. It is 52 years and the Marriage Law is two years old. It is better to set it to 48 years.
Will the data be written?
Fish costs 1,800 yuan per pound! So expensive! There are other data! Awesome! I don't know how I got it!
Wouldn't it be nice to exchange it for a marrow cleansing pill or practice some exercises? If that doesn't work, the whole super serum will do. Just exchanged it for the polar bear gene potion, and ended up never leaving the polar bear.
This is because I am afraid that Mrs. Jia and Zhang will die and will not be able to write it down.
I read that book with more than 200,000 words. It said that the protagonist was He Yuzhu, and his mother was still alive, and his father didn't read that book. The latest chapter of the book said that the protagonist joined the army, and then sent the military enlistment certificate and the certificate of the glorious home to the protagonist's family! The book Siheyuan written by your colleague is also very consistent with the plot of your book. I personally recommend you to learn from this plot. Write a plot of this to avoid having to write a runaway plot later. After all, the heroine of your book should be Chen Xueru.
, I haven't watched it yet. I'll give you a few tickets. If I don't send you a night shift, I'll basically listen to two to three hundred chapters in one night.
The author should update it soon ah ah ah ah ah
Change age
Twelve years old was changed to eighteen years old.
You described a little girl as having the strength of two hundred pounds. Do you understand the concept?









