China Entertainment: the Best Actor Starts by Obtaining Character Entries

Author, could you write less about women? It feels like the protagonist's previous girlfriend broke up not long ago and then he flirted with another girlfriend, and then broke up after a few months. If you, the author, don't know how to write emotional scenes, then you should write specifically about filming. Then eat and drink with a few friends, talk about daily life, etc., Then stop writing emotional scenes, don't write about women, don't make the protagonist look like he can't live except for women. Isn't it okay for the protagonist to be single? Can't the protagonist find an outsider? I just want to find a female star or the kind of seamless connection.

Breaking up is not straightforward. Especially the one with the ambitious girlfriend (Chapter 105) who clearly had ulterior motives in contacting her. You were also used by her for promotion and so on, and you were forcibly tied up. I still feel guilty after breaking up. I felt aggrieved. (I've already said it was an ulterior motive for the contact, so why are you sincere? You must be sick, and you need to have more relationships. You've already seen it, and you still admit it's her fault. You're really sick.

One person's assessment is that it's average. One is because this golden finger seems not to have exerted its power as it should, giving people a feeling of anticlimactic start and end. Second, there is no sense of immersion. The cheated pig's feet still seem to be ordinary, not refreshing, and give people a bland feeling.

The indigenous protagonist is the least interesting, but any rebirth or time traveler would be much more interesting.

I don't know how to evaluate it. You can really be Aquaman. Why do you have to pretend to break up? It's seamless within a few days and it's still a fake breakup. It's disgusting.

Emotions are really toxic. If you don't know how to write, don't write emotional lines. I'd better change the title of the book to I Visited the brothels in the entertainment park.

It's mindless, no time travel, no rebirth, just relying on the author to forcefully arrange it, without logic, it's chaotic, what the hell is that?

It's not bad. The protagonist's gold-fingered natural koi and Heli Crowd are the ones the author gave to the protagonist. The rest can be completed through training and hard work. These two are a bit metaphysical. There are also some bad book friends in the comment area who also said that it is just falling in love and then breaking up. In fact, some reasons are too far-fetched.

The writing is still okay, but it's very dramatic when you try to obsess over real people, and it feels very fake.

Very good, I recommend this Chinese entertainment novel