
Naruto of Konoha's Honkai System
by A Stupid One
About This Novel
Mizuki: "Naruto, do you think you can become stronger by dressing up in women's clothing?" Naruto: "Expand Judas, you can really become stronger by dressing up in women's clothing."
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Official(120)Scraped 20d ago
The anniversary celebration rate is so high
I graduated the Ice Tower in one day today. After all, I am only one Cyan Knight·Moon Soul character card away from graduating from the Ice Tower. By the way, I will send three of my commonly used Valkyries. Book club group: 289 698 267
I haven't had time these past few days, my liver has collapsed, and my harvest has been much less.
There aren't many five stars these days, and I don't even have time to write novels. By the way, I'm using Baobao, and my friends on the same server can add me. The photo has my ID.
Author your shortcomings
The first writing style is not that good Secondly, when you write a book, you fail to express the thoughts of the characters. When the third protagonist said something more important, you wrote it down and it felt like it was a very small thing. It is clear that it is so important. The fourth combat power increased too quickly Let me tell you a few bad points. When Naruto gave Kyuubi the memory of the four battles, you didn't write out Kyuubi's inner activities at all, just like playing house. When Kakashi and Obito met, what you wrote was really... I felt embarrassed when I read it. Logically speaking, Obito couldn't have forgiven Kakashi like that, but then... Where is Chapter 80? . . . I tm. . . I hope the author will be more rigorous in writing your book.
Alas, I want to give up reading this book.
The average subscription is sixty-nine, and I am eager to get it. I originally thought that the average subscription should be more than a hundred, but reality slapped me hard in the face. Well, it's my first book anyway, so I'll continue to finish it. At least there will be people reading it. If there are people reading it, I can't let you readers down. Everyone, by the way, I have published a new book, Konoha: The Beginning of the Reincarnation. I will look up the information and write this book well. The first one was also written by me because of my lack of experience. I deserved that no one read it. There is only 69 orders out of 12,000 in my collection, which is a bit too big a gap, Lan Shou.
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Community(0)
Official(120)Scraped 20d ago
The anniversary celebration rate is so high
I graduated the Ice Tower in one day today. After all, I am only one Cyan Knight·Moon Soul character card away from graduating from the Ice Tower. By the way, I will send three of my commonly used Valkyries. Book club group: 289 698 267
I haven't had time these past few days, my liver has collapsed, and my harvest has been much less.
There aren't many five stars these days, and I don't even have time to write novels. By the way, I'm using Baobao, and my friends on the same server can add me. The photo has my ID.
Author your shortcomings
The first writing style is not that good Secondly, when you write a book, you fail to express the thoughts of the characters. When the third protagonist said something more important, you wrote it down and it felt like it was a very small thing. It is clear that it is so important. The fourth combat power increased too quickly Let me tell you a few bad points. When Naruto gave Kyuubi the memory of the four battles, you didn't write out Kyuubi's inner activities at all, just like playing house. When Kakashi and Obito met, what you wrote was really... I felt embarrassed when I read it. Logically speaking, Obito couldn't have forgiven Kakashi like that, but then... Where is Chapter 80? . . . I tm. . . I hope the author will be more rigorous in writing your book.
Alas, I want to give up reading this book.
The average subscription is sixty-nine, and I am eager to get it. I originally thought that the average subscription should be more than a hundred, but reality slapped me hard in the face. Well, it's my first book anyway, so I'll continue to finish it. At least there will be people reading it. If there are people reading it, I can't let you readers down. Everyone, by the way, I have published a new book, Konoha: The Beginning of the Reincarnation. I will look up the information and write this book well. The first one was also written by me because of my lack of experience. I deserved that no one read it. There is only 69 orders out of 12,000 in my collection, which is a bit too big a gap, Lan Shou.








































