Yun Dian Xian Yuan

Yun Dian Xian Yuan

by Fantasy Novel

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About This Novel

For Shen Yun, survival is the first priority, and how to survive without threats is what he yearns for. However, just when he was seeking a better survival, changes happened. Everything was driven by the hand of fate, rolling forward like the wheel of history. From then on, we stepped into a new world, an ancient and mysterious world of cultivating immortals, slowly unfolding. A group of demons dance wildly, one move determines the world, Ethnic war, defeat all enemies with one shot! Everything comes from survival!

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Idea97mo ago

main character

Learn to be smart. If you continue like this, you will become smarter and smarter. I have forgotten the division of realms.

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A. Qing_93mo ago

The writing is good and the thinking is clear and logical, but it's really too slow.

What can be said in one sentence must be written in a specific paragraph. The fighting is originally fast-paced, but it is too long-winded and involves a lot of back and forth plots. . . . It looks like slow motion. You punch me and I dodge a punch. I kick you and you dodge a kick. The writing is good, but the rhythm is really hard to find. Press your heart and take a look. There are more than sixty chapters. I can't bear it. I feel anxious watching it. . . Personal preferences vary. The writing and plot are pretty good, so I give it up.

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Idea99mo ago

Fortunately, I just can't tell the difference! We have entered the theme, and I hope to make it more exciting and eye-catching in the future!

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