
Be an Elf Trainer in a Parallel World
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"Meikarp, Holy Flame!" ? "King Carp, Sword of the Cliff!" ? ? "King Magikarp, blast in the air!" ? ? ? "King Magikarp, I'm just kidding, don't pay attention." ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ---- The first part feels bad. If you can't stand it, you can read the two extras first and then make a decision. If you still think it's not good after reading the extras... Then I have no choice but to say goodbye.
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Official(88)Scraped 6d ago
The reason why Big Needle Bee is weak is because of its low race value, low HP, and no self-taught protection skills. It has no control other than poisoning, and its defense and special defense are not good. No matter how strong it is, it is easy to be defeated in the later stage. After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the system is not introduced and the strength is not It shows that the quality of elves seems to be the highest, and the protagonist relies on his love for elves and Goldfinger to gain four fans in the first battle, one of which seems to be the heroine. A bunch of people still have to gather together to chat while fishing, but they can still catch fish?
Can you change the introduction?
After looking at the introduction, I didn't really want to read the one that felt good... I am really short of books. . . . . . 0.0
Hum! Author, do you still remember that you said in the article that one of the three major illusions in life is that others like you? What else is coming into heat? I think this is not good, the main character is so beautiful! Female! (Emphasis added) Having a good impression, then becoming ambiguous, Among the girls I saw being fucked by the protagonist, only his younger sister seemed to be normal. Abnormal ones, such as that Wang Moumou, We obviously haven't known each other for a few days, Make it seem like you like the protagonist very much, Do you still cry when the protagonist goes solo? ! ! What a ghost! ! ! It's not a separation between life and death, and there's no special relationship. I very much doubt that most people have never been in love, and it's all based on imagination. (There is absolutely no ginseng attack on the author!) Is it any different from those harem novels in which one is attracted by the protagonist's halo and becomes one of the harem?
The plot is okay, but there are a lot of typos 😂😂
The author has a question. You used the skills that elves cannot use on it, and you still fight against it. Have you ever thought about what other people would think, and what countries would do? There are many dark aristocratic families in this world. What will they do when they see Menas and those golden fingers who have never appeared? Overall, it's very well written. I just want the author to think about this. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you.
my personal opinion
In fact, the author's writing is okay, but the author is still a little lacking in some expressions. Some plots can be omitted, and there is no need to write it so carefully. Too long will only make readers feel bored and bored, such as the part where you answer questions online, and the part before you prepare to take a break from school. (Probably some content can be streamlined) Also, it's really awkward to watch during battle. It feels like you're watching the game's system messages, "What did XXX use, and how is XXX?" (I just hope it can enhance the sense of immersion) (That's probably it. Don't criticize me. This is just my personal opinion. The author's writing is actually quite good, much better than mine. I don't even dare to post it.)
Can the author add intelligence to the protagonist?
After reading more than ten chapters, the protagonist's system was baffling, so he went home and opened Goldfinger. It was also said that newbies to the protagonist system were not given anything, but after reading a few chapters, they somehow got an extra 100 points. I have 100 extra points and I'm still using them randomly. What's the point of buying a Rasengan? Does it look good when I hold it? If you don't upgrade the elves in your hand in the early stage, buy some things that you can't use. Then the skill I bought for the Needle Bee was actually the magic power technique. The advantages of the Big Needle Bee are physical attack and speed. I don't understand what is the use of increasing the strength of the Big Needle Bee. If the protagonist conquers Hu Di, you are also going to equip Hu Di with an Eight-door Dunjia, right? It feels like the protagonist is just messing around with a bunch of resources, without any brains.
How can you make the beginning so attractive? When you come out, you lead the elf inexplicably, and when you get home again, you don't know the reason, but you are cold-faced and clinging to your hot ass. I haven't read the rest of it, and I won't read it even if it's exciting. I'll wait for your next one. You're so toxic at the beginning.
The author is great
I have read a lot of PM articles, but I can only read the books written by you and Ba Yingda. Also, the author will update it soon.
The pig's feet don't feel like pig's feet. There are too many supporting roles and it's weird.
There are too many supporting roles and they are weird.
So much nonsense
Your word count is too low. As a time traveler, there is so much nonsense.
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Official(88)Scraped 6d ago
The reason why Big Needle Bee is weak is because of its low race value, low HP, and no self-taught protection skills. It has no control other than poisoning, and its defense and special defense are not good. No matter how strong it is, it is easy to be defeated in the later stage. After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the system is not introduced and the strength is not It shows that the quality of elves seems to be the highest, and the protagonist relies on his love for elves and Goldfinger to gain four fans in the first battle, one of which seems to be the heroine. A bunch of people still have to gather together to chat while fishing, but they can still catch fish?
Can you change the introduction?
After looking at the introduction, I didn't really want to read the one that felt good... I am really short of books. . . . . . 0.0
Hum! Author, do you still remember that you said in the article that one of the three major illusions in life is that others like you? What else is coming into heat? I think this is not good, the main character is so beautiful! Female! (Emphasis added) Having a good impression, then becoming ambiguous, Among the girls I saw being fucked by the protagonist, only his younger sister seemed to be normal. Abnormal ones, such as that Wang Moumou, We obviously haven't known each other for a few days, Make it seem like you like the protagonist very much, Do you still cry when the protagonist goes solo? ! ! What a ghost! ! ! It's not a separation between life and death, and there's no special relationship. I very much doubt that most people have never been in love, and it's all based on imagination. (There is absolutely no ginseng attack on the author!) Is it any different from those harem novels in which one is attracted by the protagonist's halo and becomes one of the harem?
The plot is okay, but there are a lot of typos 😂😂
The author has a question. You used the skills that elves cannot use on it, and you still fight against it. Have you ever thought about what other people would think, and what countries would do? There are many dark aristocratic families in this world. What will they do when they see Menas and those golden fingers who have never appeared? Overall, it's very well written. I just want the author to think about this. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you.
my personal opinion
In fact, the author's writing is okay, but the author is still a little lacking in some expressions. Some plots can be omitted, and there is no need to write it so carefully. Too long will only make readers feel bored and bored, such as the part where you answer questions online, and the part before you prepare to take a break from school. (Probably some content can be streamlined) Also, it's really awkward to watch during battle. It feels like you're watching the game's system messages, "What did XXX use, and how is XXX?" (I just hope it can enhance the sense of immersion) (That's probably it. Don't criticize me. This is just my personal opinion. The author's writing is actually quite good, much better than mine. I don't even dare to post it.)
Can the author add intelligence to the protagonist?
After reading more than ten chapters, the protagonist's system was baffling, so he went home and opened Goldfinger. It was also said that newbies to the protagonist system were not given anything, but after reading a few chapters, they somehow got an extra 100 points. I have 100 extra points and I'm still using them randomly. What's the point of buying a Rasengan? Does it look good when I hold it? If you don't upgrade the elves in your hand in the early stage, buy some things that you can't use. Then the skill I bought for the Needle Bee was actually the magic power technique. The advantages of the Big Needle Bee are physical attack and speed. I don't understand what is the use of increasing the strength of the Big Needle Bee. If the protagonist conquers Hu Di, you are also going to equip Hu Di with an Eight-door Dunjia, right? It feels like the protagonist is just messing around with a bunch of resources, without any brains.
How can you make the beginning so attractive? When you come out, you lead the elf inexplicably, and when you get home again, you don't know the reason, but you are cold-faced and clinging to your hot ass. I haven't read the rest of it, and I won't read it even if it's exciting. I'll wait for your next one. You're so toxic at the beginning.
The author is great
I have read a lot of PM articles, but I can only read the books written by you and Ba Yingda. Also, the author will update it soon.
The pig's feet don't feel like pig's feet. There are too many supporting roles and it's weird.
There are too many supporting roles and they are weird.
So much nonsense
Your word count is too low. As a time traveler, there is so much nonsense.
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