
The Elf System Starts with a Frozen Bird
by I Didn't Act Like A Real Person
About This Novel
The first book is finished. Although it was a failure, and the failure was very miserable, it can be regarded as really finished. New book: I have a ninja game that you can check out if you are interested.
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Official(13)Scraped 16d ago
Send flowers.
I've already rewarded you and I'll update two more tomorrow.
Very well written, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง
Very good, keep up the good work.
Watery and poisonous
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Very good..'............
Who did the elf become?
I can't stand watching the frozen bird turn into a woman
A batch of poison, a batch of water! Goodbye! Come on, author!
Why build a city if you have nothing to do? I don't know anything, but I still want to learn from others to build a city. I said before that I don't like intrigues with others. Once the city is built, the rights and intrigues between people will appear. There are all kinds of conspiracies and tricks. This is contradictory to your previous article! Also, doesn't the protagonist have to fight? Even if you don't fight often, you still need some combat experience and your own vigilance**! Otherwise, the protagonist will not be able to react when others sneak up on him. I feel that it is better to be a strong person that everyone respects, rather than scheming with a group of people. When you become stronger in the future, won't you have everything you want? Once a city is built, it is boring to be stuck in one place, or when the protagonist goes out, a group of people discuss how to capture the city. It feels better to travel like a Pokémon.
I'm really speechless😓My Pokémon turned into a woman, I'm really speechless
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Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 16d ago
Send flowers.
I've already rewarded you and I'll update two more tomorrow.
Very well written, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง
Very good, keep up the good work.
Watery and poisonous
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Very good..'............
Who did the elf become?
I can't stand watching the frozen bird turn into a woman
A batch of poison, a batch of water! Goodbye! Come on, author!
Why build a city if you have nothing to do? I don't know anything, but I still want to learn from others to build a city. I said before that I don't like intrigues with others. Once the city is built, the rights and intrigues between people will appear. There are all kinds of conspiracies and tricks. This is contradictory to your previous article! Also, doesn't the protagonist have to fight? Even if you don't fight often, you still need some combat experience and your own vigilance**! Otherwise, the protagonist will not be able to react when others sneak up on him. I feel that it is better to be a strong person that everyone respects, rather than scheming with a group of people. When you become stronger in the future, won't you have everything you want? Once a city is built, it is boring to be stuck in one place, or when the protagonist goes out, a group of people discuss how to capture the city. It feels better to travel like a Pokémon.
I'm really speechless😓My Pokémon turned into a woman, I'm really speechless










