
National Martial Arts in Pirates
About This Novel
The sea is the place that every brave man longs for most The descendant of Chinese martial arts is reborn in this world In the previous life, he was paralyzed in order to break through the dark energy and enter the realm of transformation. The past life ended in depression, but this life will reach its peak and attain enlightenment.
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Official(20)Scraped 8d ago
National martial arts is useless. First, the development period is too slow and it is impossible to form combat power in time. Second, pure martial arts are not as powerful as Devil Fruit (forget about spring fruits and the like), great swordsmen, and top swordsman slashes (unless your martial arts is similar to the late dragon and snake, and even if your martial arts is not much different from the late dragon and snake, One Piece does not have enough resources to help you break through)
suggestion
As a bookworm for ten years, I personally think that the author can first read Pirates, and then Baidu search for the original characters he wants to write, which should improve his skills a little. In my understanding, Chinese Kung Fu, including Guoshu, is actually a set of methods that exercise certain parts of the body and use certain force-generating techniques to maximize lethality under certain conditions of strength. I think it is feasible and popular to bring this method to Pirates.
The move names are too confusing, too long/ineffective
The Eighteen Palms for Subduing the Dragon/Hitting the Cow across the Mountain... This kind of awesome power. Tiger shape/dragon shape/cannon fist... It would be better to be simple. It's nondescript and not good-looking at all...
Dream Stone
This setting is really bad, and what kind of layout, conspiracy, etc., Makes me tired of looking at it!
There is a little less insight into Chinese martial arts. Personal feeling: Chinese martial arts is about standing up, practicing, walking, fighting and developing. Generally speaking, there is very little running and it does not intersect with the training of the navy. To be honest, the plot is average.
It's just that the plot jumps too fast and can't be connected. Don't always give a quick summary, but be more detailed.
Come on, come on, come on, come on
Come on, write, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
The author has entered the palace?
When will you be clean? I'm just blowing the whistle. Hurry up and be quick.
Not from the back
Return the Dream Crystal. . . It's getting more and more confusing. This is Luffy who hasn't gone to sea yet. Basically, the plot is over.
I feel like the protagonist is mentally retarded
It's okay if you're not familiar with pirates. . Those who are familiar with it can only say that the protagonist is mentally retarded. . If you have the talent to practice martial arts, you won't be stupid.
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Official(20)Scraped 8d ago
National martial arts is useless. First, the development period is too slow and it is impossible to form combat power in time. Second, pure martial arts are not as powerful as Devil Fruit (forget about spring fruits and the like), great swordsmen, and top swordsman slashes (unless your martial arts is similar to the late dragon and snake, and even if your martial arts is not much different from the late dragon and snake, One Piece does not have enough resources to help you break through)
suggestion
As a bookworm for ten years, I personally think that the author can first read Pirates, and then Baidu search for the original characters he wants to write, which should improve his skills a little. In my understanding, Chinese Kung Fu, including Guoshu, is actually a set of methods that exercise certain parts of the body and use certain force-generating techniques to maximize lethality under certain conditions of strength. I think it is feasible and popular to bring this method to Pirates.
The move names are too confusing, too long/ineffective
The Eighteen Palms for Subduing the Dragon/Hitting the Cow across the Mountain... This kind of awesome power. Tiger shape/dragon shape/cannon fist... It would be better to be simple. It's nondescript and not good-looking at all...
Dream Stone
This setting is really bad, and what kind of layout, conspiracy, etc., Makes me tired of looking at it!
There is a little less insight into Chinese martial arts. Personal feeling: Chinese martial arts is about standing up, practicing, walking, fighting and developing. Generally speaking, there is very little running and it does not intersect with the training of the navy. To be honest, the plot is average.
It's just that the plot jumps too fast and can't be connected. Don't always give a quick summary, but be more detailed.
Come on, come on, come on, come on
Come on, write, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
The author has entered the palace?
When will you be clean? I'm just blowing the whistle. Hurry up and be quick.
Not from the back
Return the Dream Crystal. . . It's getting more and more confusing. This is Luffy who hasn't gone to sea yet. Basically, the plot is over.
I feel like the protagonist is mentally retarded
It's okay if you're not familiar with pirates. . Those who are familiar with it can only say that the protagonist is mentally retarded. . If you have the talent to practice martial arts, you won't be stupid.









