
One Piece's Absolute Breakthrough
About This Novel
In a new era with the rise of pirates, the "worst era" in which twelve supernovae are about to ignite powerfully. "Delcosa", the son of the navy, opened his eyes and raised a sneer at the corner of his mouth. "The navy seems to be underestimated" Book club group: 682358196 (newcomers and new book group)
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Official(29)Scraped 3d ago
Will the protagonist betray the navy? Who is the heroine? Just a harem or gay??????
The setting of electric eel fruit is really speechless??
Are there any marine animal-type fruits in One Piece? You can't be in the sea after eating a Devil Fruit, and I can't imagine the scene of transforming into an electric eel on land. It's good to have imagination, but it can't be unreasonable.
A word to the author!
Actually, I think that if you want to capture the reader's appetite from the beginning, you must maximize the highlights of the entire book. For example, the Devil Fruit in this book. The name of the Devil Fruit in the early stage does sound a bit off-putting. Of course, I know that the author will make some changes to this Devil Fruit in the middle and later stages of writing, but you have to think about how many people will read the middle and later stages if the readers' appetite cannot be caught in the early stage? Two-dimensional novels don't have too many words. The early chapters are the chapters that readers are most exposed to, so you should grasp them here instead of writing out the changes in the Devil Fruit step by step. This will cause the readers to be lost later due to some reasons! Of course, this is just a suggestion, readers, please don't criticize me! ??
Haha, it's too late. When I was in the navy, I was still being dissected, haha. The author is so awesome.
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This book hasn't been updated in three days. Is it outdated?
While there aren't many chapters, let's all occupy a space in case it becomes popular.
Very good novel
The writing is very good, especially the later chapters. I hope the author will speed up the update.
Idol
I like Tianyou very much. Do you know how much effort he has put in behind the scenes? Yes, he is Zhan Tianyou, the father of China's railways
The author is awesome
The electric eel was turned into a bastard by you, and the protagonist almost turned into Ken Kaneki.
I feel like the protagonist is going to change
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Community(0)
Official(29)Scraped 3d ago
Will the protagonist betray the navy? Who is the heroine? Just a harem or gay??????
The setting of electric eel fruit is really speechless??
Are there any marine animal-type fruits in One Piece? You can't be in the sea after eating a Devil Fruit, and I can't imagine the scene of transforming into an electric eel on land. It's good to have imagination, but it can't be unreasonable.
A word to the author!
Actually, I think that if you want to capture the reader's appetite from the beginning, you must maximize the highlights of the entire book. For example, the Devil Fruit in this book. The name of the Devil Fruit in the early stage does sound a bit off-putting. Of course, I know that the author will make some changes to this Devil Fruit in the middle and later stages of writing, but you have to think about how many people will read the middle and later stages if the readers' appetite cannot be caught in the early stage? Two-dimensional novels don't have too many words. The early chapters are the chapters that readers are most exposed to, so you should grasp them here instead of writing out the changes in the Devil Fruit step by step. This will cause the readers to be lost later due to some reasons! Of course, this is just a suggestion, readers, please don't criticize me! ??
Haha, it's too late. When I was in the navy, I was still being dissected, haha. The author is so awesome.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This book hasn't been updated in three days. Is it outdated?
While there aren't many chapters, let's all occupy a space in case it becomes popular.
Very good novel
The writing is very good, especially the later chapters. I hope the author will speed up the update.
Idol
I like Tianyou very much. Do you know how much effort he has put in behind the scenes? Yes, he is Zhan Tianyou, the father of China's railways
The author is awesome
The electric eel was turned into a bastard by you, and the protagonist almost turned into Ken Kaneki.
I feel like the protagonist is going to change














