Bai Yueguang, the Villain in the Adult Novel

This book tells the story of the heroine Lou Man Yue who commented on a chronicle novel where the author had incorrect views. The next day, she suddenly traveled through time and became the villain in the book, Silly Bai Tian Bai Yue Guang, who could not survive five pictures. Then she worked hard to survive.

This book tells the story of the heroine, Man Yue, who accidentally slipped into the book of the author whom she once scolded and became the villain of that book. The author's writing is very good and it is a very interesting book.

This is a book that requires a strong imagination to read. The words are not expressive, the punctuation is confusing, the context is incoherent, and the text is full of typos... He, she, he, she, too many words and too few words. Washing your face with water can turn into washing your face with cement. It is not even as good as a pirated book. This is a novel. It is complicated. Let's change the name. It is called for everyone to find faults and find the wrong words, missing and incorrect places. They should be on every page. It is not detailed. I'm sorry, didn't you check it when you uploaded it? I'm so speechless, I'm really tired. I've been reading for a whole day, and I've read more than 100 chapters one after another. I'm really strong enough, and so are you guys. It's too hard, I feel uncomfortable when I see the mistakes, and I often make mistakes. Are you a voice-to-text converter? You shouldn't make so many mistakes. You're too careless and gave up...

In Lou Manyue's era, having a job was equivalent to a golden rice bowl, and my father also said that he had arranged a university place for his daughter. Then Li Dani and his son are really a pair of virtues (｀Δ´)! Hateful

What a bloody plot

Moreover, she has evidence, connections and identity as a martyr's orphan to protect her, and she will not live in the village in the future. When the village chief and his family had no time to collect the stolen goods and evidence, I was confused by not dealing with the village chief and his family! He will only keep stealing things from the village chief's house! To arouse the enemy, let people collect all the evidence! Really speechless! I always feel like what the heroine is doing is helping them! Let's not talk about how the heroine found out that they had the aura of the protagonist, but she didn't even have the courage to test them! Only sneaking around! Speechless, really speechless! I read some abandoned articles!

1. What's wrong with the punctuation marks? They're marked randomly! [Emot=default,42/]The target area is different, and the meaning is completely different. 2. There are too many typos, and I don't know why. Many friends try to catch bugs, but it seems to be of no use. The white cotton cloth turned into "white Mingbu" and it was absolutely amazing to me. Is it okay for the author to make a big change? 3. It's amazing. There are direct inconsistencies in some places, and the plot is not very coherent. 4. What about the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists? Their interactions are too little. I feel that there is no distinction between priority and priority. The heroine and the little sisters wrote a little too much. 5. It makes me very confused. I was told that the male protagonist is 16, but when I saw it later, I was very confused. I didn't know whether he was 16 or 18. 6. There are too many trivial matters in the novel, which makes me feel like there is a lot of nonsense, and I can't see the important plot for a long time. 7. I hope the author can continue to work hard and check the manuscript more often. It will be much better. 8. I can only say goodbye, I can't bear it. [Emot=default,42/] 9. Personal opinions, don't argue.

What should I say after seeing Chapter 64? The beginning was quite attractive, but as I read on, I felt that the writing was going on at a fast pace and at a slow pace in the west. Let's just say that the heroine returns to the old house to get things. It's just beginning. It's gone. It's about the villain and the educated youth. After reading it for a long time, I can finally watch the heroine get things. Then she ran to the captain's house. OK, she's not a good person. She took everything. Finally, she went back to the old house to get things. It didn't say whether she took something or not. What she took, she just ran away. I gave a lonely old man some rice noodles and kept him hidden. After that I ran to the mountains to practice. I thought I could find the things on the mountain even if the village chief hid them. Instead, I wrote that the villain dug a trap and caught the prey. After dawn, he went to the county town to sell the prey. I haven't read Chapter 65. I guess it will be a long chapter about the villain selling the prey, and then I will turn around and write about what the heroine is doing. In fact, I didn't understand it at the beginning. What was the point of the heroine pretending to be dead, so that the village chief would announce the dissolution of the engagement after thinking she was dead, and let people die in the house without any funeral arrangements? No one in the whole village asked.

The punctuation marks are filled in randomly, and the plot is the same here and that. It makes me dizzy and I still don't understand. Can this be approved? Then I can also write novels

In this book, the author probably doesn't fully understand who the heroine is. In Lou Manyue's book, shouldn't she be the heroine written by the author? There are a lot of messy stories here about the original male and female protagonists, who were reborn and traveled through time again. It makes me feel upset and angry.