Manor Revolution

Some of them are elemental creatures or ghosts, and modern weapons are simply not possible. The physical ones are okay. If you really think you can become invincible by climbing the modern technology tree, it will be boring.

The character of the protagonist is not likable. Based on the time traveler, with the addition of plug-ins, his performance is not even as good as that of ordinary natives, which makes him look uncomfortable. . . .

You must believe that someone secretly likes you somewhere you don't know.

The author has many advantages, such as being very active in unfolding the worldview, but the shortcoming is also here, the unfolding is too active. As a result, some systems, such as currency, appear to be a bit collapsed in the early stage. In addition, the author is not very sensitive to numbers. The value in the previous sentence can change in the next sentence, which makes the impression very bad. The second is that the game has a setting similar to the combat power value, which makes the battle very boring. It is just like those junk games that purely rely on numerical values. You can tell at a glance whether you can win or not. It's like this in the plot. When threatening others, "My combat power is 700, and your combat power is 600." When testing weapons, "The glasses show that the combat power of this gun is 500." It's very boring to fly with a big force, and it's not as good as a more richly designed career or attack method. The third is that the author's control over the plot is a bit weak. A novice village was attacked three times in a massacre-like manner during 15% of the progress. Not to mention the repetitive plot, is this a plot that a novel focusing on farming should have? As for the heroine, the kind and intelligent character established in the early stage is completely enough. In the later stage, she has to add sinister attributes and dual personality settings. Don't you think it is a bit too much to stuff so many memory points into one person? The fourth is to control the plot. I didn't pay much attention to the place where the farming story can be developed. Farming is all about management and farmhouse entertainment. The result is Icefield Town, which is fully capable of writing about the protagonist's construction, developing a lot of subsequent plots, and bloodbath three times. The first three people in the protagonist group. It's obviously possible to write about being kinder internally, but the main character has to fight wits and courage with his teammates at the base. Is this a suitable development of a farming article? Do you deserve the ease in the label? The rest are almost all good points. It can be seen that a lot of references were used in the setting, but it is not copied mechanically. Although the rhythm is not well controlled, it is either too slow or too fast, but I listen to the readers' opinions. Anyway, to sum up, I can count them among the best in online articles. Although they are not as good as those above, they are more than better than those below.

The name of the protagonist... German Iron-blooded Chancellor Bismarck is reborn?

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, book title and introduction. It really has nothing to do with the content.

The early setting is quite attractive, but the setting that I want to spread out in the later stage is too big. I guess the author can't control it. He also started to use technology and started to move closer to the direction of the witch. It was boring to watch.

I think the author did not need the role of Gypsy when writing. Some of the magic knowledge gained through her in the early stage can be said to be notes obtained from the shipwreck. I feel that this role does not play a particularly important role in it, and there was also the time when the crisis in the town was about to be solved. At that time, when the protagonist said that he would take her to see the results, I thought that the protagonist would appear with this Gypsy to make the finale. Unexpectedly, the protagonist with little ability (at the time) appeared throughout the whole process, while the one with witchcraft and ability hid behind, and in the end he came out to treat someone, and there was no follow-up. What I couldn't accept the most was confessing my cheating to her later on. Gone

Didn't it say that living corpses cannot cross the ice field? How did the five protagonists get past it?

Did you work overtime to update the book? Did you write the data for pig iron, wrought iron, and steel backwards? The reason why steel is called steel is because it contains carbon. When good weapons in ancient times were repeatedly forged, they turned into steel because of the carbon attached to them. Wrought iron is pure iron. How can steel have lower carbon content than wrought iron? If the carbon content is low, iron will be soft.