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Let me talk about it first. The article is different from others. The female protagonist is relatively ordinary, and she also has the desires and selfishness that someone should have, which is consistent with reality. But there are a few small problems. 1. It can be seen from the article that the heroine is a relatively cautious person. She can detect the little actions of the prince knowing that her surname is Yu Shi. Why can't she realize that the eldest son Yu has the same surname as her. 2The author does not often use punctuation marks. 3 Yu Jun'er can accept Hui'er, why can't he accept Daukou? Everyone has selfish motives, so how does Jun'er know that Hui'er's family has no selfish motives. Moreover, Daukong is just a ten-year-old child. What kind of bad thoughts can she have? Even if she has any, it can cause big waves. She is only ten years old. Has Yu Juner's twenty years of life been in vain? Also, why is Yu Juner so guarded against Daukong? Because she has never paid attention to Daukong. 4. If Yu Jun'er is timid, then how can she be so arrogant? It's contradictory. Moreover, she is arrogant and at the same time trying to please others. She either lives arrogantly, or... She has died once. What else is there to be afraid of? Of course, there is fear. Then don't act so arrogant in your heart, as if I am the only one in the world. Show it to me. What's the point of saying it in your heart? 5 If Yu Juner were half as good as Lady Jade, it might be better. 6 Don't guard against those who should be guarded against, and guard against those who shouldn't be guarded against. I hope the author will correct it

Why pay? I'm a poor man, so I won't watch it. Huh, I'll pay the lazy fee. Oh, but it's very interesting. Bye bye.

My personal opinion is quite exclusive, don't fight in groups. . I'm just stating the facts

Keep up the good work

Jun'er is so smart

One more thing to add, when writing the psychological description of the heroine, you should write about the heroine's agility and wisdom, instead of talking about how awesome or noble you were in the past, that is all in the past.

What! It's boring after watching half of it

Come on and write

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