Farm Fish Are Not Easy to Mess With

I've read the book reviews, the introduction, and the content, but I'm not interested in pursuing it. But today I found that the book friend circle is very active, and readers and authors seem to be discussing very harmoniously. Then I will also tell you why I gave up and had no enthusiasm. I hope the author will work harder. I can see that you are very serious and responsible. I didn't read much of it, mainly because the male protagonist appeared too early, and the image he created was not what I liked, and the female protagonist was a bit stupid. As soon as I watched it, I felt a bit awkward. She took out her things and didn't remember to bring them in or check them. She also clearly knew that there was someone nearby, so the meeting between them made me feel very far-fetched and awkward. It was immediately clear to me that this was just a book, and there was no way to bring it in. I felt that there was no logic at all. , It can be considered a small mistake, but people are plump, and judging from the details, it immediately leaves a bad impression. I prefer articles that are fresher and more natural. Especially for an old bookworm like me, the first impression is very important. I always judge whether I can read it after reading it. I don't have much curiosity and want to read all the books. I hope there will be more authors, come on, especially at the beginning, you must write well and develop the characters well. Even if there are many flaws in the later things, I can follow it. The details are actually quite important. Although it is fictional, there must be a little logic and don't jump into the drama. Different people have different experiences. Some people don't care about those things, and some people care about other things. The above is purely my personal opinion.

It looks pretty good so far, but there are some things that need to be corrected. For example, the article sets the heroine to be 8 years old. At this age, she shouldn't be picked up and carried, and she shouldn't need to be carried when going out! Every time the article mentions that the heroine carries her family or relatives on her back, I think it's weird when I think of the heroine's 8-year-old age. I saw that the author mentioned that the age of the heroine was modified later, so some parts of the article need to be modified appropriately, otherwise it will look awkward and reduce readers' favorability. Also, I hope that modern things will not appear too outrageous, such as cars, airplanes, motorcycles, etc.! After all no one else can have a better source explanation!

In fact, from the beginning of reading this book until yesterday, I didn't like the appearance and behavior of the male protagonist, because the male protagonist appeared too early and fell in love with the female protagonist too quickly. The male protagonist was thirty years old in his previous life. Although he is now a teenager, he suddenly fell in love with an 11-year-old girl. Dolls are weird no matter how you look at them. After all, the body and psychology are different. The interaction between the male and female protagonists makes me feel a little greasy🌝If I look at an 11-year-old boy now, I will only think he is cute, and I will not have the idea of liking or even falling in love. But just when I saw the chapters where the bandits entered the mountains, I changed my mind. The hero's grandfather is really a hero. After all, Gou Xiong Ridge has nothing to do with him, but he still rushed forward to resist the bandits. Maybe it was because of the general. He couldn't ignore it. I was really moved by the part where the hero's grandfather resisted the bandits. I was not moved by the male protagonist, but I was moved by his grandfather👐 The situation opened up, which made me have less opinions on the male protagonist ( ͡ಠ ʖ̯ ͡ಠ ) The damn charm of the male protagonist ᥬ🌚᭄ᥬ🌝᭄

There are two points for deducting one star. There are many typos, and there are some problems with the description of the male protagonist and Qi Ying. When the male and female protagonists met for the first time, the male protagonist picked up the female protagonist's crossbow. In the subsequent meeting, he did not say that he wanted to return it to the female protagonist, but kept it privately. Wouldn't his first reaction after picking up someone else's things be to return it to others? It's not because I think things like crossbows are so powerful that I keep them Not to mention that the male protagonist gave the female protagonist the bear skin and bear paw money in order to repay this incident. All this was done after the male protagonist secretly left the crossbow and did not return it to the female protagonist. Moreover, when the female protagonist rescued the male protagonist, the male protagonist and Qi Ying admitted that they had picked up the crossbow, but had no intention of returning it to the female protagonist. If someone else has the same idea as me, maybe two stars will be deducted, one star for typos and one star for the male protagonist not returning the items.

The writing is quite good. I strongly recommend everyone to read it. Everyone should support good works.

A very good fantasy novel

Not bad, very nice, big, come on, come on, okay?

I used to be angry when I saw Yuan Yue unrepentant, but now when I see her the same way, I feel completely calm and even tired. I can't sit still anymore and just want to know how many chapters are left before she can get together and leave.

I instantly thought of Bear Big Bear II hahaha

Yuan Yue is so annoying! Don't harm Xiao Nandong