Lay Lord

There are still people writing about the harem these days, just write about it, but the stories about several women are inconsistent, which is a pity.

This boss is not very good. He obviously makes money from Zhou Ba Wa, but with Zhou Ba Wa's attitude, he probably didn't expect that Zhou Ba Wa actually knows some brands of women's cosmetics.

Hello author, may I know if you still update? I really like this novel you wrote. There are very few novels of this style.

You don't have any precautions, and you think you can save people from fire and water if you have extraordinary skills? Where did you start, what rubbish was brushed aside, wouldn't others be suspicious of your prediction? Speaking of other things, I thought I was aloof, but ended up having nothing to do, and I was so idle. In addition, the revenge of the players was really not as funny as the elementary school students writing essays and wasting the employment opportunities they had worked so hard to get. Summary: Holy Mother, take it for granted, not to mention that none of the supporting characters have high IQs, but simply have no IQ, and they all rely on forcible intelligence.

Originally it was okay, I thought it could be a 4-star game, with various feeding operations,,,, so I downgraded it to 2 stars, because I always like to force my wits down. After reading more than 70 chapters, there are two places where I force my wits down. One is when the bandit steals money, and then kills the protagonist game character. Now the protagonist here buys something and sells it for 100,000 and then spends nothing. He forcibly gives it to me for free, and then loses all the money. I looked at the back and saw that the money given was not wasted. But I still feel that it is s13. If it is a liar, there is nothing you can do if someone else runs away. Maybe this doesn't matter to you, Let me give you an example, you have one million, and then you give it to Qin Shihuang, and wait for him to make you a general, 😓

If his father wants a secular god, he will give it to him? If his father wants to buy a tank protagonist, should he also buy one? Is this nonsense?

This book can be said to be a fairy tale. After reading more than 160 chapters, the biggest poisonous point is Shen Qian. I don't object to writing about the harem, but it must be written reasonably. Zhou Bala is ordinary, and Shen Qian is a goddess. She should not confess her love because of a piece of rubber. This plot feels too poisonous. Also, it would be nice if Xiaoba had a psychological change. In the end, you have to become a secular master, and you cannot keep putting it aside. A secular master should not just rely on secular gods, but he should also be strong himself. You can experience something or understand something. For example, the game will invade the main world or parent SL, and the protagonist has a desire to become stronger. It's not about taking things as they come. Also, the heroine finally becomes a rich man by relying on her ability to catch Zhou Zhou. This plot feels too cliche. It feels a bit bland and too routine if the plot is always the same. (The overall content of the novel is not what is mentioned above). Personal suggestions are for reference only. If there is any inappropriateness, please feel free to comment.

Toxic! Toxic! Toxic! Run quickly. The plot of reducing the protagonist's intelligence is really disgusting. Tmd This is the first time I have seen such an indescribable plot. I guess the author still feels good about himself. If you don't believe me, you can read it yourself. There are chapter and paragraph comments.

Good guy, I have been raising him for a year. This is the rhythm of raising him to death.

The setting is good, but the emotional line is not well written. The protagonist is a scumbag, and the writing of the girls is somewhat awkward. Unfortunately, there is less copywriting and more reality writing. If you are interested, I suggest you skip it.