Nine Realms Evil Saint

You are too long-winded. There are no words to describe your long-windedness. I'll punch you out. I've read hundreds of words and I haven't hit anyone yet.

I feel that as an author, no matter what readers say, even if it is derogatory, you cannot say such things publicly yourself, which hurts people's hearts and seems to have no depth. If you really think that your writing is good, you will criticize them yourself. If you think you are bad, if there are too many, it is naturally because your writing is not good. This is something you need to correct yourself, rather than criticizing them directly. If you are an author who is close to the people, others will naturally respect you and support you, just like the emperors in ancient times. Okay, one last thing to say, your update... Is really a bit slow, and I can't even reward you if I want to.

Slow, the biggest disadvantage. Can you tell me more about it and when it will be charged? Although the money is not that bad, I still feel a little uncomfortable when I have to charge for reading a novel. To be honest, it is better to search online. Also, if I hurry up and don't mind tipping, I read the book too fast now, and I'll be reading from the beginning to the present in about two days.

I have to say that there are some good parts in your novel, such as the prose, which is a very distinctive fantasy novel. There are too many descriptions in some parts. Fantasy novels do not need to be like this. Maybe you should consider the chapter list and write less. I feel that the reading is a bit bland. You do not use deeds to describe the power of the characters, but use the surrounding characters to highlight the characters after the victory of the small battle, which cannot reflect the domineering nature of the protagonist.

The plot is too simple. When the protagonist meets a person, ah, others say that the protagonist is seeking death, seeking death, and being abused. Others are frightened, horrified, and frightened. Can you change the words? I really like it. I feel like giving it 2 stars is too high.

After all, you are still too young! No experience in writing a book! A human head can still be dripping with blood after half a month? ? 666, I will obey you even if I don't support the wall! !

It's okay, but the main character is too stable, a bit wretched and underdeveloped, don't be too frivolous.

I feel so retarded. I start with a wave of taunts and then act cool. Pig's feet carry the light of hatred. Things will come to me wherever I go. When fighting and killing people, I also start with a wave of taunts. There are a lot of chatter. Problems that can be solved with one move. You have to use ten moves. It's not a competition. It's a waste of energy.

The writing for the protagonist in the not so good early stage was too awesome.

Just update it stably