This Girl Wants to Become an Immortal
About This Novel
Ye Mingsheng was a killer in his previous life and died during the execution of his mission. Once he was reborn and came to the world of immortality, he felt the happiness of family, friendship and love. But survival in the world of immortality is so cruel. For the sake of his family and friends, Ye Mingsheng yearns for the top of his strength and practices diligently. But found out that this was just a joke played by Heaven. Zhou Zhouwen, trapped in a small, dark and cold space, learned that this was just the content of a book, and that she was just the original heroine who was suppressed by the reborn heroine. Ye Mingsheng was unwilling to give in and vowed to fight against heaven and earth and go against heaven and earth. I am who I am, not a role assigned by anyone. If there is a male protagonist, he will appear later. The heroine's growth type becomes stronger in the later stage. All kinds of golden fingers are on their way. A new author, the writing style is bad, don't criticize if you don't like it.
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Official(9)Scraped 15d ago
Detailed description and plot connection are very important
Great, the article is very nice. But I think it lacks necessary details and plot connection. This makes the meeting look like a running account. For example: after the heroine first meets Zi Yi, Zi Yi hires someone to kill the heroine. In fact, this plot can be detailed to describe Zi Yi's psychology after meeting the heroine and before sending someone to kill her. Of course, refining details and bridging the plot goes beyond that. You can also refine the fighting scenes and trace the causes and consequences. So the writing style needs to be improved, but it doesn't matter, just think more carefully. Tips: I think the heroine is too smooth sailing, and after all, the heroine was a killer in her previous life. I think the calmness that a killer should have is not well reflected in the current description. For example, in cultivation, one blindly pursues speed rather than the stability of each level. Summary: The article should be polished and polished to enrich the content.
It's very beautiful. Keep writing hard💪
Come on big
It looks good. I hope the heroine can practice swordsmanship. I really like this kind of cold and decisive heroine.
It's beautiful, I hope the author doesn't give up
nice,
It's good but lacking. The finale is over so soon. I wonder if you can write another similar novel. I'm looking forward to it.
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Come on, baby. I love you. Come on. Come on.
Babies are the best! ! ! Come on, I love you, okay
The sword fairy who likes ice spirit roots
Because the heroine Mao doesn't cultivate herself and forgets her love, I will give you more updates! The story is very interesting. I think the heroine should be cool and wise.
nice
Oh my god, why are there only 8 levels for cultivating immortals, and 9 levels for cultivating demons? It's a bit unreasonable, because what if there is a fight between cultivating immortals and cultivating demons? And I think it's better to have at least 9 levels for cultivating immortals. After all, 9 is the best, but there are There are as many as 12 major levels of cultivation, including Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, transformation of gods, distraction, integration, refining the void, leaving the body, cave void, transcending tribulations, and Mahayana. Because there are more levels, the number of words to write is longer, and some of them take thousands of chapters to finish.
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Community(0)
Official(9)Scraped 15d ago
Detailed description and plot connection are very important
Great, the article is very nice. But I think it lacks necessary details and plot connection. This makes the meeting look like a running account. For example: after the heroine first meets Zi Yi, Zi Yi hires someone to kill the heroine. In fact, this plot can be detailed to describe Zi Yi's psychology after meeting the heroine and before sending someone to kill her. Of course, refining details and bridging the plot goes beyond that. You can also refine the fighting scenes and trace the causes and consequences. So the writing style needs to be improved, but it doesn't matter, just think more carefully. Tips: I think the heroine is too smooth sailing, and after all, the heroine was a killer in her previous life. I think the calmness that a killer should have is not well reflected in the current description. For example, in cultivation, one blindly pursues speed rather than the stability of each level. Summary: The article should be polished and polished to enrich the content.
It's very beautiful. Keep writing hard💪
Come on big
It looks good. I hope the heroine can practice swordsmanship. I really like this kind of cold and decisive heroine.
It's beautiful, I hope the author doesn't give up
nice,
It's good but lacking. The finale is over so soon. I wonder if you can write another similar novel. I'm looking forward to it.
Check in
Update update update update update update
Come on, baby. I love you. Come on. Come on.
Babies are the best! ! ! Come on, I love you, okay
The sword fairy who likes ice spirit roots
Because the heroine Mao doesn't cultivate herself and forgets her love, I will give you more updates! The story is very interesting. I think the heroine should be cool and wise.
nice
Oh my god, why are there only 8 levels for cultivating immortals, and 9 levels for cultivating demons? It's a bit unreasonable, because what if there is a fight between cultivating immortals and cultivating demons? And I think it's better to have at least 9 levels for cultivating immortals. After all, 9 is the best, but there are There are as many as 12 major levels of cultivation, including Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, transformation of gods, distraction, integration, refining the void, leaving the body, cave void, transcending tribulations, and Mahayana. Because there are more levels, the number of words to write is longer, and some of them take thousands of chapters to finish.
