Xing Yu Xian Yuan
by Zi·yu
About This Novel
With a bead in my hand, I have the world. A mute boy, by chance, embarked on the path of cultivating immortality, creating a legend in the world of immortality.
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Official(6)Scraped 7d ago
It might be good if you change the gender of the protagonist. If many people see it as a male protagonist, they might leave.
Emmm Lin Yueyang just can't speak, what does it have to do with IQ and brain! Just because you can't speak doesn't mean you're stupid! I really accept these people's ideas. If you can't speak, you have a problem with your IQ. I'm just waiting for a slap in the face from behind
The writing is really bad. After more than 50 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.
My writing skills are very poor, and some incomprehensible descriptions and expressions are difficult to understand. Che Zhuluan talks a lot, and a lot of the content is repeated to make up the number of words, and the narrative method is like a running account, which is very boring. Very careless, too many typos, and a lot of illogical settings The protagonist's golden finger is too open, reaching an outrageous level. There is nothing to look forward to. It is so overdone that it cannot even achieve basic enjoyment. It is the author's self-pleasure all the way that makes people have no desire to continue reading. Anyway, the writing is really bad and has no redeeming qualities.
Ouch, I thought Instructor Lin was the male protagonist! I was originally thinking about why I could speak. Wasn't it because I was mute? Could it be that he couldn't speak at the back? Only after looking at the back did he realize that it was me who made a mistake. The male protagonist is Instructor Lin's goose hhhh
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A Buddhist reader floats by... The author keeps it up, no matter how the storyline develops, I'm looking forward to it.
Ah, look at Lin Yueyang's situation, good guy. I think Lin Yueyang may be a person who was reborn and traveled through time. I don't know why he can't speak, but he must be very powerful, after all, he traveled through time!
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Official(6)Scraped 7d ago
It might be good if you change the gender of the protagonist. If many people see it as a male protagonist, they might leave.
Emmm Lin Yueyang just can't speak, what does it have to do with IQ and brain! Just because you can't speak doesn't mean you're stupid! I really accept these people's ideas. If you can't speak, you have a problem with your IQ. I'm just waiting for a slap in the face from behind
The writing is really bad. After more than 50 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.
My writing skills are very poor, and some incomprehensible descriptions and expressions are difficult to understand. Che Zhuluan talks a lot, and a lot of the content is repeated to make up the number of words, and the narrative method is like a running account, which is very boring. Very careless, too many typos, and a lot of illogical settings The protagonist's golden finger is too open, reaching an outrageous level. There is nothing to look forward to. It is so overdone that it cannot even achieve basic enjoyment. It is the author's self-pleasure all the way that makes people have no desire to continue reading. Anyway, the writing is really bad and has no redeeming qualities.
Ouch, I thought Instructor Lin was the male protagonist! I was originally thinking about why I could speak. Wasn't it because I was mute? Could it be that he couldn't speak at the back? Only after looking at the back did he realize that it was me who made a mistake. The male protagonist is Instructor Lin's goose hhhh
support
A Buddhist reader floats by... The author keeps it up, no matter how the storyline develops, I'm looking forward to it.
Ah, look at Lin Yueyang's situation, good guy. I think Lin Yueyang may be a person who was reborn and traveled through time. I don't know why he can't speak, but he must be very powerful, after all, he traveled through time!
