My Peerless Demon Lord

I want to build a check-in building... Why do I say brain twitch? Because Shiyi is already in the late stage of lazy cancer and doesn't particularly like trouble. After building the check-in building, he has to come and hang out every day, which is very troublesome! So I'm talking about brain twitching... (I type so many words just for water experience... Water experience...)

Good aspects: Foreshadowing at the beginning, what happened ten thousand years ago, who designed the protagonist; what happened in ten thousand years, what are the humans, demons, and gods like now, and why they became like this. The characters are likeable, the calm and proud male protagonist, and the ferocious and arrogant female protagonist are basically established. The emotional scenes are reasonable. In the early stage, the male protagonist's disgust with the "old devil", the loneliness and dependence of the two souls who have been dead for ten thousand years, and the later stage, the male and female protagonists can't help themselves in love and flirting. It can be said that it is beyond the standard among a group of fantasy novels.

Bad aspects: The writing style is a bit poor, there are too many modern languages ​​interspersed with the classical fantasy, and there are also many vulgar words such as "Ni Ma" and "Fuck". The fight scenes are also crude. The setting of the world view is poor, and the setting of the cultivation level is rough. From what I have read, it is suspected of borrowing from my Lady of the God of War (it is not an advertisement, I only read the first few chapters of this book and stopped reading it). There are no basic settings such as what characteristics each realm has, how difficult it is to break through, and how powerful it can be. The characters of the male and female protagonists are not very fleshed out. How did they become the Holy Emperor and the Demon King thousands of years ago? How did the heroine get appointed to take on the responsibility of the Demon King in the face of danger? How come the male and female protagonists who were supremely cultivated in their previous lives have so few secret techniques and are so useless now? They can only rely on the Nine Transformations of the Demon, the Exploding Spirit Pill, the Holy Emperor Sword and the Haotian Hammer. The male protagonist doesn't even have any sword skills, and he doesn't even have the means to disappear or change his appearance when being hunted. The plot has no ups and downs, and the male and female protagonists are always being hunted, often on the line between life and death, which is tiring. You can write more plots about daily life + romance + local customs.

Bad aspects: The writing style is a bit poor, there are too many modern languages ​​interspersed with the classical fantasy, and there are also many vulgar words such as "Ni Ma" and "Fuck". The fight scenes are also crude. The setting of the world view is poor, and the setting of the cultivation level is rough. From what I have read, it is suspected of borrowing from my Lady of the God of War (it is not an advertisement, I only read the first few chapters of this book and stopped reading it). There are no basic settings such as what characteristics each realm has, how difficult it is to break through, and how powerful it can be. The characters of the male and female protagonists are not very fleshed out. How did they become the Holy Emperor and the Demon King thousands of years ago? How did the heroine get appointed to take on the responsibility of the Demon King in the face of danger? How come the male and female protagonists who were supremely cultivated in their previous lives have so few secret techniques and are so useless now? They can only rely on the Nine Transformations of the Demon, the Exploding Spirit Pill, the Holy Emperor Sword and the Haotian Hammer. The male protagonist doesn't even have any sword skills, and he doesn't even have the means to disappear or change his appearance when being hunted. The plot has no ups and downs, and the male and female protagonists are always being hunted, often on the line between life and death, which is tiring. You can write more plots about daily life + romance + local customs.

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- I've just read a dozen chapters and it's pretty good to catch up, and the content and plot are pretty good! Some of the words were used very reasonably, I thought it was quite funny, and the atmosphere was very cheerful! Especially the opening chapters are particularly interesting Holy Emperor Ye Wuchen is so miserable! He was reborn after fighting with a certain demon king in the middle of the fight? Are they a couple or a son-in-law? Are the enemies in the past life and the couples today the same? The wise and mighty Holy Emperor didn't know that a certain demon had died and had been replaced by a woman? I really doubt that my eyesight is bad and I despise it! Putting aside the fact that she is a woman, there must be a gap between pretending to be an old man, right? Moreover, after traveling to ten thousand years later, the two of them may have been fighting all night in a dream? I don't know who killed whom? The IQ of a certain holy emperor who was busy in this life has even dropped, and the elixir he bought with defrauded money was defrauded by a certain demon? Are you letting a brat and brother-in-law trick you? You can imagine how miserable the next days will be! To tell the truth: I rarely read fantasy genres. I once read a book written by a certain platinum master. I struggled to read it and couldn't understand it! It doesn't work if you wear it quickly, but the rest will do. My favorite is urban, fairy tale, supernatural and so on! I found this book today. After reading a few chapters, I felt that I had no problem reading it. At the very least, I could understand it without any difficulty! It's not that the writing is not good! Because my education is too low, I don't understand some esoteric words very well, and I seem to be very slow. Since then, I have been avoiding fantasy novels. This is the second time today! No matter how you say it, no matter who writes it, no matter what kind of book it is, as long as you can understand it and read it, I think it is a good book! It doesn't matter if it's a stud novel or not, just go for it! Highly recommended

I think it's a bit useless. You, the male protagonist, are really strong. You were a strong man thousands of years ago. Why are you so rubbish now? You should be a treasure at the bottom of the box or something. It should be commonplace for the weak to defeat the strong. Is it really the most important thing to rely on this name? In fact, the book is not bad, but the plot feels a bit weak. The book still has a future. I still approve of this book

First of all, let me tell you my point of view. I have been a bookworm for many years. I have read a lot of time travel and rebirth stories. The more I read them, the more funny they become. I even can't read them until I've even finished half of them. I feel like they're all useless. They're either reincarnations or diaosi time travels. It is a time travel by one person, but this book by the author is novel. Not only are the male and female protagonists funny and funny, but there is also Mo Ran, a younger brother of Mo Xiyan's family. The character of Mo Ran vividly portrays the child's innocence and sinisterness. At first glance, he looks innocent, but in fact, he secretly thinks about how to trick you. Support the author greatly

I really can't stand it when the protagonist is bullied like this from the beginning. Can't you be stronger? It's really not okay to be beaten by my wife every day!

Da'ang, do you like sugar or blades~ We agreed to reveal our identity, but you... If you are stuck on a good article, it will be a big problem if you can't write it. Isn't it a big problem?