In the Original God, I Am Really Not Without Misfortune

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On the top of Qingyun, he stared at the Rock King Emperor. Emperor Yanwang caressed the lock of the world and said with emotion: "When I gave you this natal magic weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much... After all, you were just a rag collector at the time and didn't have much money to buy materials. He stared deeply into Ning Guang and found that he really couldn't see through her. Emperor Yanwang shook his head, "I didn't expect that you could practice it to this point, and even have 90% of the power of the Four Winds Original Code! ... Compared with the original code of the Four Winds, there is only one difference! " Ning Guang remained silent, just waiting quietly for Emperor Yan Wang to finish speaking. "Awesome! Awesome! Emperor Yanwang clicked his tongue in admiration, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless weapon?" " Condensing light and silence. She knows all this. "But..." Emperor Yanwang changed the topic, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! ... Your lock incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with the five original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the original code of the four winds. " Emperor Yanwang looked at Ningguang, but found that her expression had not changed much. Emperor Yan Wang couldn't help but said, "These five divine flames are the crystal flame, the mixed essence flame, the floating jing flame, the zirconium eye flame and the Xijing flame. ... Except for the first one that I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Ruotuo has them! ! ... Do you understand? " Ning Guang looked at Emperor Yan Wang coldly, and slowly said, "I have the last four. ... The only thing missing is the first one. " Emperor Yanwang was stunned for a moment. How is that possible! ? Those four divine flames... How could she have them! ? Could it be Gan Yu? Emperor Yan Wang raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame? " Ningguang nodded and said: "Yes, I came here just for the water experience."

1 You are completely a bloodthirsty maniac, killing this and that, even the original god. You were a human in your previous life, so I have never seen such a person. 2 Stallions, Harem, although it is not like those novels where the female character falls in love with the protagonist without thinking, but it feels no different.

Talking about the overall situation, it's actually pretty good, but does the author understand why Wuxian is so popular? I personally think it is because he is truly inhumane, but the protagonist does not show it in the whole book, especially when he talks about marrying many wives, he is poisoned. After that, why does the protagonist want to defeat the Seven Gods and the Heavenly Law? I personally feel that if the protagonist wants to live a better life in this world, and wants to eliminate the problem of ghosts having to eat people, it is more reasonable to continuously become stronger, or to build a kingdom of ghosts to fight against the Seven Kingdoms and the Heavenly Law. This can be placed in the system task. Then there is the current plot. The protagonist has defeated Zhongli. What will he do next? Should he directly kill Tianli? The strongest god has been defeated, and the other five can be beaten casually, unless they unite, but there are still four gods who have not appeared. Although it's a bit late now, I still hope the author can see it I wish the author will greatly improve

I took a look and found that there are a few shortcomings. 1. The problem of female protagonists. Dark novels should have no female protagonists, or at most only one female protagonist. The harem is a bit of a problem. 2. Regarding combat power, the protagonist's hidden combat power has surpassed that of the strongest demon. Who will he fight next? Or is it that he is no longer strong, or how strong can he become? The concept of description is missing. 3. Plot problem. The protagonist is now in Liyue, and there are five gods behind him. How do you develop in the future? The Layer Rock Abyss is probably about the same as Novice Village. The next five gods are almost defeated in a duel. That's it, come on

After reading a few chapters, it was okay, but the protagonist's ideals were a bit wishful thinking, and even a little childish. I just wanted to say, wouldn't it be good to build a ghost organization and pretend to be awesome everywhere? You have to play some kind of domination, and when something goes wrong, the protagonist still has to take care of it, giving people a feeling of being restrained and being held back.

Just because you wrote about the protagonist eating people, you can only say that you deserve to be banned

The protagonist has no humanity and is not worthy of being a son of a human being.

You are no longer decisive in killing. Instead, they were killing indiscriminately.