Empress of the Second Week: There's Something Wrong with This Plot!
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Li Yunsheng traveled through the book he wrote and became the chief minister of the dynasty. Awaken the emotional system, trigger the empress's mood swings, and get rewards. Empress Erzhoumu: "This time I want to take back everything that belongs to me!" However. When she held the script in hand and waited for Li Yunsheng to enter the game, she discovered that something was wrong with the plot!
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Official(58)Scraped 20d ago
It's a pleasure to watch, don't believe what others say about female escorts and courtesans. It is normal for a woman who is close to the protagonist to appear in a novel. Besides, why do other women have to be pushed to the bed when they are described? What kind of logic is this? The protagonist is set to be the prime minister of a country, and may also have the status of a creator god. It is abnormal to have few outstanding women around him. Even if there is only one female protagonist, there is no need to forcibly give the protagonist an aura of wisdom. The single heroine is not the main heroine. The protagonist's psychology, body and behavior should not be derailed. He only sleeps with one woman all the time. What is this if he isn't a single heroine? Doesn't it mean that there are so many excellent women that we can only take one scoop out of three thousand? Besides, when you read this kind of article, you just want to see something ambiguous, something shy, and finally a strong one. The writing is quite good, the plot is great, the text is smooth, the characters are not too smart, and the logic is not wrong... The author is great, come on, update more! ! !
Are all the comments fake?
Why does it look like his meowing and mindless comments? Have you read it carefully and tell me what you think.
A little poison will be fine, but a big poison will kill people.
6. There is a plot of giving away a girl. It seems to be a single female protagonist. Otherwise, it cannot be explained. What about the protagonist's female guard? After so many descriptions, it is not accepted in the end? If so, why did Su Wanwan write like this? The last gift? It's very strange that there are still two female characters who haven't appeared. King Qin and the youngest king. King Qin only appears as a stand-in. How do you plan to write these two female characters? Either write it in a charming way, or don't over-describe it. At first, I thought Su Wanwan would accept it. Generally speaking, the positioning is not clear enough. Ancient historical romance? It's still an ancient historical love story, no, there are also martial arts and fantasy elements. There are so many styles. Are you sure you can master them? Although I see that there are no big problems with the settings now, they are actually held back by the empress and the protagonist. Sooner or later, the plot must be advanced. Otherwise, it will keep stalling and dragging on. It's a bit too high and too low.
Has anyone seen it? Afraid of being cheated
The so-called single female protagonist, the male protagonist cannot have skin contact with other women except the female protagonist, or even verbally flirt with other women, and the female protagonist will not kill the female protagonist. The female protagonist even has more roles than the female protagonist. There are also maids. Sometimes a female protagonist may be written into the devil and eventually become a harem. I don't know how many of them the author has hit. These are absolutely poisonous in single female protagonist novels. A simple sentence: the male protagonist cannot be ambiguous, accept maids, men and women are equal, and those who have murderous intentions towards the male protagonist must be killed, not blindly accepted as subordinates
Your updates are so slow. Damn it. I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch them for a day.
Ten pictures a day is not too much, right? Either one page has 100,000 words, or ten pages a day, the author makes his choice!
It looks great, I'm looking forward to it, come on, author
It's pretty good, but there's just one thing I don't like about it.
I don't like giving away girls, even if they have nothing to do with the protagonist, if they write something nice or something in front of them, then they do things for the protagonist and then give them to others, I will withdraw them first.
New book support
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
The last one came from, is this one a single female protagonist?
Ten words, ten words, ten words, ten words
I've read Chapter 150, and I feel like the heroine loves the original owner.
The protagonist is the successor who has traveled back in time to the original owner. Every time there is a love line, the heroine will recall her childhood. The heroine loved the original owner. It feels a bit green to write this. Unless it is later written that the original owner and the protagonist are actually the same person, otherwise the protagonist will be the successor after all.
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Official(58)Scraped 20d ago
It's a pleasure to watch, don't believe what others say about female escorts and courtesans. It is normal for a woman who is close to the protagonist to appear in a novel. Besides, why do other women have to be pushed to the bed when they are described? What kind of logic is this? The protagonist is set to be the prime minister of a country, and may also have the status of a creator god. It is abnormal to have few outstanding women around him. Even if there is only one female protagonist, there is no need to forcibly give the protagonist an aura of wisdom. The single heroine is not the main heroine. The protagonist's psychology, body and behavior should not be derailed. He only sleeps with one woman all the time. What is this if he isn't a single heroine? Doesn't it mean that there are so many excellent women that we can only take one scoop out of three thousand? Besides, when you read this kind of article, you just want to see something ambiguous, something shy, and finally a strong one. The writing is quite good, the plot is great, the text is smooth, the characters are not too smart, and the logic is not wrong... The author is great, come on, update more! ! !
Are all the comments fake?
Why does it look like his meowing and mindless comments? Have you read it carefully and tell me what you think.
A little poison will be fine, but a big poison will kill people.
6. There is a plot of giving away a girl. It seems to be a single female protagonist. Otherwise, it cannot be explained. What about the protagonist's female guard? After so many descriptions, it is not accepted in the end? If so, why did Su Wanwan write like this? The last gift? It's very strange that there are still two female characters who haven't appeared. King Qin and the youngest king. King Qin only appears as a stand-in. How do you plan to write these two female characters? Either write it in a charming way, or don't over-describe it. At first, I thought Su Wanwan would accept it. Generally speaking, the positioning is not clear enough. Ancient historical romance? It's still an ancient historical love story, no, there are also martial arts and fantasy elements. There are so many styles. Are you sure you can master them? Although I see that there are no big problems with the settings now, they are actually held back by the empress and the protagonist. Sooner or later, the plot must be advanced. Otherwise, it will keep stalling and dragging on. It's a bit too high and too low.
Has anyone seen it? Afraid of being cheated
The so-called single female protagonist, the male protagonist cannot have skin contact with other women except the female protagonist, or even verbally flirt with other women, and the female protagonist will not kill the female protagonist. The female protagonist even has more roles than the female protagonist. There are also maids. Sometimes a female protagonist may be written into the devil and eventually become a harem. I don't know how many of them the author has hit. These are absolutely poisonous in single female protagonist novels. A simple sentence: the male protagonist cannot be ambiguous, accept maids, men and women are equal, and those who have murderous intentions towards the male protagonist must be killed, not blindly accepted as subordinates
Your updates are so slow. Damn it. I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch them for a day.
Ten pictures a day is not too much, right? Either one page has 100,000 words, or ten pages a day, the author makes his choice!
It looks great, I'm looking forward to it, come on, author
It's pretty good, but there's just one thing I don't like about it.
I don't like giving away girls, even if they have nothing to do with the protagonist, if they write something nice or something in front of them, then they do things for the protagonist and then give them to others, I will withdraw them first.
New book support
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
The last one came from, is this one a single female protagonist?
Ten words, ten words, ten words, ten words
I've read Chapter 150, and I feel like the heroine loves the original owner.
The protagonist is the successor who has traveled back in time to the original owner. Every time there is a love line, the heroine will recall her childhood. The heroine loved the original owner. It feels a bit green to write this. Unless it is later written that the original owner and the protagonist are actually the same person, otherwise the protagonist will be the successor after all.
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The plot is very interesting. It's on the shelves today to help you out.
The second episode is very nice
Li Yunsheng traveled through the book he wrote and became the chief minister of the dynasty. Awaken the emotional system, trigger the empress's mood swings, and get rewards. Empress Erzhoumu: "This time I want to take back everything that belongs to me!" However. When she held the script in hand and waited for Li Yunsheng to enter the game, she discovered that something was wrong with the plot!
Li Yunsheng traveled through the book he wrote and became the chief minister of the dynasty. Awaken the emotional system, trigger the empress's mood swings, and get rewards. Empress Erzhoumu: "This time I want to take back everything that belongs to me!" However. When she held the script in hand and waited for Li Yunsheng to enter the game, she discovered that something was wrong with the plot!
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