
Just Like Huangliang Dream
About This Novel
Life is like a dream, and everything is like drinking yellow rice. If I have a dream, I will be lucky in three lifetimes.
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Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
Check in and check in😍😍
Check in and check in! It seems like it's just me these two days~ My friends, come on for me~
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Personally, I suggest that the author should write in the third person, so that readers can relate to it, but writing in the first person is not so easy, and it may give people a particularly awkward feeling. To be honest, not many people like this kind of article. If the author likes to write in the first person, treat it as if I didn't say it.
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Hehe, I came here after seeing you today. Sorry if it's my first time giving a bad suggestion. What can I say? You can polish these chapters a few more times and add some details. Some aspects of the characters are too formatted. The boy's feelings come and go quickly. Unless something profound happens, only the person who appears at that specific time and place will leave a deep memory. And everyone (yes, you and I 😂) have made a mistake. There are some prefaces that do not match the subtitles, and some wrong sentences. We must have a certain degree of logic and lay down the foreshadowing appropriately. We must not dig holes randomly. If there are holes, we must fill them (cough cough cough, I am going too far). You've started updating, and I'm going to start too, come on💪
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Don't leave me alone in this embarrassment 😂😂😂 Goose goose goose goose
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In fact, I think you, the author, are quite good. At least yours has passed the review. It is not easy to pass the review in QRead, because QRead is a place where great people gather. I will give you a warm feeling.
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Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
Check in and check in😍😍
Check in and check in! It seems like it's just me these two days~ My friends, come on for me~
suggestion
Personally, I suggest that the author should write in the third person, so that readers can relate to it, but writing in the first person is not so easy, and it may give people a particularly awkward feeling. To be honest, not many people like this kind of article. If the author likes to write in the first person, treat it as if I didn't say it.
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Hehe, I came here after seeing you today. Sorry if it's my first time giving a bad suggestion. What can I say? You can polish these chapters a few more times and add some details. Some aspects of the characters are too formatted. The boy's feelings come and go quickly. Unless something profound happens, only the person who appears at that specific time and place will leave a deep memory. And everyone (yes, you and I 😂) have made a mistake. There are some prefaces that do not match the subtitles, and some wrong sentences. We must have a certain degree of logic and lay down the foreshadowing appropriately. We must not dig holes randomly. If there are holes, we must fill them (cough cough cough, I am going too far). You've started updating, and I'm going to start too, come on💪
...
Don't leave me alone in this embarrassment 😂😂😂 Goose goose goose goose
Check in
In fact, I think you, the author, are quite good. At least yours has passed the review. It is not easy to pass the review in QRead, because QRead is a place where great people gather. I will give you a warm feeling.






























