Urban Supreme Immortal Doctor
by Writing To Ask About Longevity
About This Novel
A mysterious young man breaks into the flower capital, with a golden needle in his left hand to save the world, and a long sword in his right hand to defeat enemies, and his thoughts are clear and unfettered.
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Official(6)Scraped 5d ago
Collect this excellent work, which is as wonderful as the handsome writer Gu Zhangze's "The Great Spinning Song of China". Please collect each other's "Song of China's Great Spinning" to each other's collection.
The content is wonderful, the characters are vivid, the story is vivid, the plot is touching and fascinating.
Suggestion: The code words between the lines are smooth and neat. In addition, the code words are a bit slow and cannot keep up with the reader's rhythm.
Why did the protagonist's name change? ? ?
At the beginning, it was Chen Feiyu, but why did it say that after arriving in Yanjing, he changed into Chen Tianyang? ? ? ? Can you tell me why?
The vision is broad, traveling between ancient and modern times, the characters are vivid, the language is simple, there is love throughout, joy and hatred, the story is exciting and fascinating.
I have written a blind request and taken the readers too seriously. Isn't it that the Guizhou donkey has run out of skills?
In the first half, the elves are more and more chaotic.
brave
The text is full of typos and punctuation marks, making it difficult to read.
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Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 5d ago
Collect this excellent work, which is as wonderful as the handsome writer Gu Zhangze's "The Great Spinning Song of China". Please collect each other's "Song of China's Great Spinning" to each other's collection.
The content is wonderful, the characters are vivid, the story is vivid, the plot is touching and fascinating.
Suggestion: The code words between the lines are smooth and neat. In addition, the code words are a bit slow and cannot keep up with the reader's rhythm.
Why did the protagonist's name change? ? ?
At the beginning, it was Chen Feiyu, but why did it say that after arriving in Yanjing, he changed into Chen Tianyang? ? ? ? Can you tell me why?
The vision is broad, traveling between ancient and modern times, the characters are vivid, the language is simple, there is love throughout, joy and hatred, the story is exciting and fascinating.
I have written a blind request and taken the readers too seriously. Isn't it that the Guizhou donkey has run out of skills?
In the first half, the elves are more and more chaotic.
brave
The text is full of typos and punctuation marks, making it difficult to read.
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