Game Universe: Awakening at the Beginning and All Things Strengthened
by Dalong, Mr.
About This Novel
When Huang Hong woke up, he felt that the sky was falling. The whole city was pulled into a game world called "Paradise". When he opened his eyes, there was a green-skinned monster riding on his face. Fortunately, he has awakened the ability to strengthen all things, which can not only strengthen all things, but also load them with unique bonuses and abilities... [Old gourd (treasure)] Affix: container, recovery Category: Rare Attributes (treasure): Spring, which can continuously produce clear and sweet springs. After drinking, a small amount of physical strength can be restored. Loading ability: You can solidify any elixir in the spring, so that the resulting sweet spring has some of the effects of the elixir. ... The spliced world, the echo of time and space, the battle of professionals, the fighting of billions of races... When Huang Hong rushed out of the world called "Paradise", he discovered that everything was far from simple as he imagined. [Character is online, brothers, please feel free to enter the trap! ]
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Official(16)Scraped 1mo ago
Sick brain
Meet people there. Others trade with him. No physical transactions. The protagonist believed it. . Tell the protagonist to save people. The protagonist agreed. Just because of the so-called transaction. Nothing real. . The latter may be true. That was also a failure. Trust others so easily. . What are you writing about? . In fact, the boss here can ask the protagonist to go to the police station. . Maybe the protagonist is willing to do it. . After all, that's what the author describes. .
Is the author Chinese? In Chapter 27, one sentence will cost you 2 points regardless of whether you write it well or not. In other places, I will jump out to explain, but here I am completely pretending to be dead.
A mediocre book in ancient times
I don't elaborate when I should, I don't omit when I should omit, I don't write about the interesting parts, I probably want to be different from others, the ancient school of Emperor style is very outdated, the Kingdom of God and Summons, I couldn't memorize them before! If you can't convert group portraits, don't write about Emperor style! Goldfinger could have had some very interesting settings, but in the end it was a fixed promotion. You could guess the ending after reading the beginning! Several copies were also written in a confusing way! It's better to make an original copy! The DND panel used was tilted to a messy place, making it very confusing! Moreover, the spiritual direction of the whole book is also messy. I don't know what you want to do! I want to be safe but want to take risks, I want to cheat but I'm afraid it's too big and I want to drive too big... I'm totally confused! Made a mistake that many authors have made, want them all! But I don't have the strength to control it. I want it all, and I want to occupy a little of everything.
If you write this kind of article in the imperial style, your grades will definitely not be high.
Isn't this similar to astronomy? This kind of literary lone wolf is the best way to write, and the team can also accept it. You write the emperor style and support a country. Tsk tsk, the results will tell you the result.
The third picture feels like a bit of a failure.
I can understand that you want to describe the mentality of a mastermind behind the scenes, and give the protagonist a goal, which is okay, but Eli is a little too early. The world view of the protagonist in front of you has not yet been unfolded, and an enemy from the sky comes inexplicably, which is somewhat beyond the normal growth range of the protagonist. Secondly, the description is a bit too harsh, a bit like the slap-in-the-face plot of the Crooked Dragon King. It feels completely unnecessary. You are a normal supporting character, a small boss in the early stage, and a person from the so-called upper level world. Not to mention how cautious you are, your mentality should be more He prefers the cruel type, rather than the crooked-mouthed Dragon King type that is necessary. After all, in the world view of paradise, if you want to survive, in addition to hugging the thigh, you have to be more cruel, colder and cold-blooded than others, instead of just being arrogant without reason. How can such a person survive?
The only bad thing is that he hasn't developed much yet, and he's not even number one in the world when an alien enemy comes.
The subject matter is okay, but the attributes are petty, and the operation is as fierce as a tiger. At first glance, the attributes are 25
In order to prevent crashes, the plug-in is designed to make me think. I slapped my forehead and wrote something wrong.
It was okay at first but very weird later on. The author may have forgotten the settings for himself. Iron Man's Mark series armor appeared not long after the beginning. When the Marvel plot came later, I had no idea what it was. Later, when I encountered so many earths, I didn't react at all. What world the protagonist was born in was also very confusing. It was obvious at the beginning that it was a parallel world similar to Earth, but it didn't match up at all later.
'It was okay at the beginning, but average later on, and I have no interest in it.
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Official(16)Scraped 1mo ago
Sick brain
Meet people there. Others trade with him. No physical transactions. The protagonist believed it. . Tell the protagonist to save people. The protagonist agreed. Just because of the so-called transaction. Nothing real. . The latter may be true. That was also a failure. Trust others so easily. . What are you writing about? . In fact, the boss here can ask the protagonist to go to the police station. . Maybe the protagonist is willing to do it. . After all, that's what the author describes. .
Is the author Chinese? In Chapter 27, one sentence will cost you 2 points regardless of whether you write it well or not. In other places, I will jump out to explain, but here I am completely pretending to be dead.
A mediocre book in ancient times
I don't elaborate when I should, I don't omit when I should omit, I don't write about the interesting parts, I probably want to be different from others, the ancient school of Emperor style is very outdated, the Kingdom of God and Summons, I couldn't memorize them before! If you can't convert group portraits, don't write about Emperor style! Goldfinger could have had some very interesting settings, but in the end it was a fixed promotion. You could guess the ending after reading the beginning! Several copies were also written in a confusing way! It's better to make an original copy! The DND panel used was tilted to a messy place, making it very confusing! Moreover, the spiritual direction of the whole book is also messy. I don't know what you want to do! I want to be safe but want to take risks, I want to cheat but I'm afraid it's too big and I want to drive too big... I'm totally confused! Made a mistake that many authors have made, want them all! But I don't have the strength to control it. I want it all, and I want to occupy a little of everything.
If you write this kind of article in the imperial style, your grades will definitely not be high.
Isn't this similar to astronomy? This kind of literary lone wolf is the best way to write, and the team can also accept it. You write the emperor style and support a country. Tsk tsk, the results will tell you the result.
The third picture feels like a bit of a failure.
I can understand that you want to describe the mentality of a mastermind behind the scenes, and give the protagonist a goal, which is okay, but Eli is a little too early. The world view of the protagonist in front of you has not yet been unfolded, and an enemy from the sky comes inexplicably, which is somewhat beyond the normal growth range of the protagonist. Secondly, the description is a bit too harsh, a bit like the slap-in-the-face plot of the Crooked Dragon King. It feels completely unnecessary. You are a normal supporting character, a small boss in the early stage, and a person from the so-called upper level world. Not to mention how cautious you are, your mentality should be more He prefers the cruel type, rather than the crooked-mouthed Dragon King type that is necessary. After all, in the world view of paradise, if you want to survive, in addition to hugging the thigh, you have to be more cruel, colder and cold-blooded than others, instead of just being arrogant without reason. How can such a person survive?
The only bad thing is that he hasn't developed much yet, and he's not even number one in the world when an alien enemy comes.
The subject matter is okay, but the attributes are petty, and the operation is as fierce as a tiger. At first glance, the attributes are 25
In order to prevent crashes, the plug-in is designed to make me think. I slapped my forehead and wrote something wrong.
It was okay at first but very weird later on. The author may have forgotten the settings for himself. Iron Man's Mark series armor appeared not long after the beginning. When the Marvel plot came later, I had no idea what it was. Later, when I encountered so many earths, I didn't react at all. What world the protagonist was born in was also very confusing. It was obvious at the beginning that it was a parallel world similar to Earth, but it didn't match up at all later.
'It was okay at the beginning, but average later on, and I have no interest in it.
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