Veterans in Beijing
About This Novel
It tells the story of veteran Wang Donghao, who just returned from the army and came to Beijing, the capital of his heart, and experienced work, love and life here!
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Official(7)Scraped 15d ago
Just introduce comrade Wang Shuai. Can you not write about comrade Wang Shuai all the time? It's annoying to watch.
Just introduce comrade Wang Shuai. Can you not write comrade Wang Shuai all the time later? This is not how you code. Just introduce the character once. Write the name directly. Everyone knows the relationship between the characters. There is no need to repeat it.
Update, hurry up
The more I look at it, the more annoyed I become
It's too long-winded. Please understand a little more about soldiers before writing.
The story is okay, but it's a bit like a primary school student writing a composition. The fiancée was drugged and violated, and the incident ended with a beating. It was a bit hard for me to accept. . . .
I hope the stories told in the work can bring you a pleasant reading experience. Thumbs up to the author!
Um
It feels a bit verbose,,,,. . . . Does the author know the soldier n?
Please don't make mistakes that even elementary school students wouldn't make, okay?
When I saw the second chapter, I felt something was wrong. Why did it say that there was only: without "" after it?
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Official(7)Scraped 15d ago
Just introduce comrade Wang Shuai. Can you not write about comrade Wang Shuai all the time? It's annoying to watch.
Just introduce comrade Wang Shuai. Can you not write comrade Wang Shuai all the time later? This is not how you code. Just introduce the character once. Write the name directly. Everyone knows the relationship between the characters. There is no need to repeat it.
Update, hurry up
The more I look at it, the more annoyed I become
It's too long-winded. Please understand a little more about soldiers before writing.
The story is okay, but it's a bit like a primary school student writing a composition. The fiancée was drugged and violated, and the incident ended with a beating. It was a bit hard for me to accept. . . .
I hope the stories told in the work can bring you a pleasant reading experience. Thumbs up to the author!
Um
It feels a bit verbose,,,,. . . . Does the author know the soldier n?
Please don't make mistakes that even elementary school students wouldn't make, okay?
When I saw the second chapter, I felt something was wrong. Why did it say that there was only: without "" after it?
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