Cyberpunk: Rise 2070

Very good author, keep writing.

When will the author respond with updates?

It's all good now, but it seems like it's been discontinued

Traveling to the world of Cyberpunk 2077, it is natural to burn Arasaka Tower to ashes. What, you said that this year is 2070, and Night City, which has just finished the Unification War, is in ruins and waiting for redevelopment, and everything is full of vitality? Then the plan will have to be modified. Earn popularity among the citizens, build connections in the law enforcement department, create a business as a springboard, seize the throne of the powerful mayor of Night City, promote the unification of North America, and replace Miles as president. Use force against corporations and bring back the Roosevelt Tax Code. Fish: Freedom? That's just a lie that corporations put ordinary people into the ditch. Ever since that punk Johnny Silverhand blew up Arasaka Tower with a nuclear bomb, everyone in Night City has been suffering. What they urgently need is not freedom, but rules, boundaries, and protection. What citizens need is a leader who can avoid chaos and a tyrant who can cut off the corporate claws. I gave them protection, I gave them a way out of the corporate throat, so they followed me, and that's why I'm here.

I've read Chapter 11 so far, and it's actually pretty good. The writing is quite fluent, and the words and sentences are natural. There are no awkward long complex clauses like other online writers. In terms of relaxation and rhythm, I have only read 11 chapters, and I can't tell much. I don't feel that anything is wordy or unclear. However, author, I suggest you not to describe in detail in areas that you do not understand. I am a boxing student, and I am absolutely sure that you don't even know how to wrap a glove. There are a lot of black boxing in the United States, such as bare boxing or unrestricted, or kick and punch rules, or mixed martial arts rules. 2077 Does focus on boxing, but there are actually many black boxing with other rules, and the boxing you describe is almost not black, there are not even black hands, there is no hugging, shoulder, hitting or pulling. As a street black boxing, it is still too clean. In terms of settings, you can understand something very well when you touch it, and you can experience some of the experiences of the designer and the user. So as someone who has studied boxing, I will tell you that the gloves used in Muay Thai kickboxing and Sanda are the same as boxing. Can't you learn some Muay Thai kickboxing? And the last point, I think you haven't thought it through very carefully. I can occasionally find some logical loopholes in your plot. I hope your Night City can be more vivid, three-dimensional and real in the future.