
There's Something Wrong with My Mouth
by The Left Eye Is A Little Blue
About This Novel
What is it like to have mutated organs? Bai Wenlin said: Since the mouth has mutated, there is no need to blow on the ones that burn the mouth, and the ones that bite the teeth have become the last, and they dare to put swords in their mouths, and they dare to eat firecrackers as snacks. Not only that, the scrap metal, dirt, rotten stones, etc. In the community have also disappeared. Several peaches that have just grown at the door have been bald overnight. Drinking the expired beer thrown away by the supermarket at the door, Bai Wenlin burped with satisfaction. "Sure enough, things that cost money are more effective!" After a while, a black bead slowly took shape in his stomach.
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Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
No one is watching
I'm really afraid that you, the author, will suddenly become a eunuch.
very good
However, we should pay attention to the psychological description of the protagonist. It is a bit unqualified in the current situation. The protagonist can be a good guy, but he cannot be a good old guy.
No parents are dead
You are playing with fire. This is not easy to write.
Why is no one watching?
What's going on? Since there's no one around, if this continues, it's 100% eunuch!
Come on! ! !
Come on^0^~^0^~. You must not be a eunuch, there are many authors who have entered the palace, most of them want ****!
Author: Dear, is school starting?
good
The book is good, but why is it so obscene? It looked uncomfortable, so I backed out.
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
No one is watching
I'm really afraid that you, the author, will suddenly become a eunuch.
very good
However, we should pay attention to the psychological description of the protagonist. It is a bit unqualified in the current situation. The protagonist can be a good guy, but he cannot be a good old guy.
No parents are dead
You are playing with fire. This is not easy to write.
Why is no one watching?
What's going on? Since there's no one around, if this continues, it's 100% eunuch!
Come on! ! !
Come on^0^~^0^~. You must not be a eunuch, there are many authors who have entered the palace, most of them want ****!
Author: Dear, is school starting?
good
The book is good, but why is it so obscene? It looked uncomfortable, so I backed out.
































