The Happy Landlord of the Tang Dynasty

The novel is just to pass the time and listen to the story. If everything belongs to the emperor, then who will invent it, Zhenguan chair, Zhenguan table, I want to change the way of thinking. If you travel to Zhenguan in the Tang Dynasty and invent everything, everything must belong to the emperor. You feel uncomfortable, and why would anyone sneak into the blacksmithing team? Isn't it said that the five Zhuangzi are all loyal people? I know it's impossible to write a book to suit everyone's taste, but don't make people speechless! I haven't read history, so I don't know. My personal opinion is that when you are an emperor, you have to name tables, chairs and benches that you didn't make yourself. If you write history, you should write it in a very domineering way.

First, the protagonist and Li Shimin are originally from Li Shi in Longxi. The genealogy and birthmark on the protagonist must be registered and passed down to the whole family. This is a must. Don't think it is impossible. We all have to hold birthday banquets now, let alone ancient times. Secondly, regarding motion sickness, it is pure nonsense. I can understand the bumpiness, but the carriage is not fast and bumpy, but you actually said motion sickness and even vomited. Third, your thinking is too simple for the aristocratic class of feudal society and the aristocratic class of the ninth-grade Zhongzheng system. It is understandable if you say that the protagonist is a side house, but it turns out that the protagonist is still a member of the main family and one of the clan elders. Who dares to offend him? If he is a descendant of the royal family, haha, I just want to say that you almost wrote the protagonist as an invincible boss. As a result, you also wrote that someone dared to offend. Also, don't think about the education given to disciples by the aristocratic clan in ancient times. It is probably because of watching too many costume dramas. Dandies are not allowed to appear in the aristocratic clan, because the aristocratic clan cares about reputation. The inheritance of the five surnames and seven hopes relies on reputation and the control of books.

As for the author, I would like to give you some advice. What you wrote is in line with modern people's thoughts, that is, whether it's time travel or modern writing, if you travel to the past in modern times, you won't have the emotion when dozens of people died as mentioned in the previous chapters. To be honest, the Chinese army has died in the tens of millions. If you don't fight now, you won't have that feeling. What's more, in ancient times, you You just wore it and died in front of your eyes, but you heard it. What did you feel? The writing was a bit artificial, and the knowledge you revealed later. To be honest, what you revealed within a month of wearing it required decades of development of that era. You, a person in your 30s, didn't know what it means to wear it, and what is in your hand is yours. Don't you know that wealth should not be exposed? A person in his 30s is not doing well in modern times. How did you get all the ability to write poems? You may have forgotten the memorization. Now I ask you to memorize 30 poems from the back of the junior high school book. You can't remember a few of them, and you even recite poems for the occasion. But this is a novel. You just have to bear with it. Your dealings with Cheng Yaojin later. To be honest, you are in your 30s and deal with elders. Do you think you gave something to your elders and the elders took it away without saying a word? Just say that Cheng Yaojin has that kind of character in history. But don't forget that he is a big shot. With his abrupt personality, it is impossible for him to just take things without giving gifts in return. Your character description is not detailed. When you are talking about rewarding servants, do you think a man in his 30s can be so generous? Don't you mean he was modern before? It was possible in ancient times. Modern people, this is how you pay your employees? Or are you talking about the money your boss gives you like this? Did your 30-year-old man tell you about the craftsman himself? I'm not sure you're still giving rewards for nearly half a year? Is it like this if you wear it? 100 Cash reward? You said you have strong purchasing power, how do you do this? What you wrote is already broken. Of course, what you wrote is still interesting. Otherwise, I wouldn't have read more than 60 chapters. It's just what you wrote that made me feel that I have no expectations. You did not choose to gradually become stronger, but you had everything all at once. Why didn't you bring a satellite? Why didn't you say that the person who traveled through time was a scientist? You have a mentality, if you want to write, you'd better read the novels I've read, the historical novels and time-travel novels on my bookshelf, look at them. I've only read a few hundred books, and I've just finished the good ones and kept them. Look, some of them are not too poisonous. Secondly, they are in line with modern people's thoughts. Thirdly, most of the people who read novels are really losers like us, and you write erotic stories. Better. Then try to restrain your development as much as possible. Most people like the rhythm of steady development and harvesting a lot. You also have to count the power and financial resources you write in the novel. You have to be clear about development, otherwise there will be no sense of achievement. The pace is tight. Well, I can only say this. I hope you read it and write better.

What can I say, the writing is okay. It was good when I traveled back in time at the beginning, but it was too addictive to recite poems later. If you are used to cool writing, I suggest you not read it. I am too tired from reading, but I still like vernacular writing. Classical Chinese writing is not suitable for me, so I gave up.

Historical novels are very difficult to write. Currently, many authors maintain a certain attitude towards historical novels. Fans are important, collection building is important, etc. Few authors pay such attention to branch lines. Of course, big data is also important for a good book, but the soul of the book is even more important. A good history book must not only reflect the historical and cultural background of the time and the characteristics of the era, but also involve history. All aspects of the era include farming, commerce, religion, life and other aspects, from nobles to common people, especially the ordinary life of poor people. More importantly, I think you, the author, have written very wonderfully. You have a certain amount of knowledge about the social structure of the Tang Dynasty and the close-up of the feudal dynasty. It is almost closely linked to the official history. It is commendable. I hope you can continue to work hard and don't be proud and keep up the good work.

First, Cheng Yaojin's weapon, when Cheng Yaojin boasted about it at first, he said it was a powerful weapon, but later Qin Qiong said it was a big axe, which was an anticlimax. Second, you have not understood that in feudal society, a small county magistrate is still the main figure of the family. What's more, it is not the protagonist's fault in the first place, but he dares to arrest people with titles. The grades are not equal. Wherever you dare to arrest, the difference between titles and officials is that one has status and the other has real power. Third, you wrote a little too much about Emperor Li Shimin and Empress Changsun.

If you travel across time, you will travel across time, and the landlords will be landlords, so they must rely on the royal children. At this point in my resume, the book is already half-complete. Look at the content again and give it a passing grade at most.

Reduce, some unnecessary repetition of sentences, or redundant use. Overall it's pretty good. Read some historical books for reference, keep your feet on the ground, and don't be impatient just to keep up with the progress. The cycle will gradually become more stable. Good articles stand the test of time.

I won't comment ❤️, I haven't read the book, I just read the comments, and I just want to say that this author is NB... Book friends give their opinions and make people angry!

There are more than ten chapters, and the characters have been introduced all the time. Even passerby A has to be introduced in detail. Is it necessary to shorten the word count like this! ?