The First Village of Tang Dynasty

That is to say, the reader's reading experience was not considered, nor was the rationality of the novel considered. It was enough that I felt comfortable writing it. Originally, I wanted to continue reading it, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I found that if you read it without thinking, it's okay. I can't stand a novel that feels like nonsense at first glance. Why do I say it's self-pleasure? Everything is taken for granted, and there is no sense of involvement of the protagonist. In this regard, I suggest the author refer to the book Tang Brick. His time travel is the same but there is no system, but the tasks he creates are flesh and blood. I hope it will help your writing skills. The subject matter of this book is quite good, but what is unreasonable is that the novel looks like an outline, without polishing and embellishment of the article, and many plots are unreasonable and unreasonable. It affects the reading experience. When the reader wants to follow the plot and accumulate goodwill, suddenly a mysterious operation wipes out the reader's goodwill. For example, when the protagonist has just arrived in ancient times, first of all, the protagonist does not behave like an ordinary person, as if he is going on an outing. Secondly, there is no resistance when meeting new family members. It's unreasonable. You can have a process of gradually moving me, but your description is very abrupt. Secondly, you build public facilities right from the beginning. Please have a deep understanding of the lives and personalities of farmers and villagers at that time. Feudal society was not so enlightened. If you can't say it well, the article will collapse, because what you wrote It is a life article, not a business start-up in ancient times. You need to integrate into it to make better discoveries (such as making friends in the early stage, becoming famous in the local area, becoming famous as an official, etc., And then turning your village into a fiefdom. After that, it will be reasonable for you to do whatever you want), even if you have a system , the formula you wrote is a bit like the formula of occupying land and becoming king in the end of the world, but it is not suitable for time travel to ancient times. Furthermore, you do not know enough about the early Tang Dynasty, its culture (customs and production level), politics (how deep the "water" was at that time), and humanities (the personality traits and life attitudes of the people and nobles). It's not enough for you to write it yourself, but it takes some skill to sell it.

Build a sign-in building. The first floor is ten coins, and every hundred floors is one knot. It's not easy to work. The cap is two hundred. Please improve it😁

When I saw the public toilet, I saw that the protagonist actually built a modern imitation flush toilet. I felt a bit superior but also had questions. I wanted to know what the villagers used to wipe their butts when they went to the toilet. Can they be flushed away with sticks, bamboo strips or the like?

Don't you know what your level is? You've all been bullied. The third sister was kidnapped, so you just rescued her secretly. Why do you keep this system? If you have a system and you are a coward, why do you need a system?

If the author doesn't want to write it, or if he can't write it, just be a eunuch. It's boring to keep going like this. Starting from Chapter 302, the protagonist knows that Li Erdu has already planned to kill your family and the whole village. The protagonist says he wants revenge, but from Chapter 302 to Chapter 418, where is the protagonist's revenge? Especially in Chapter 418, it is said that the protagonist is still paying taxes to Li Er and giving Li Jing 15,000 horses. When I saw this, I was really dumbfounded! The boss is going to kill your whole family, yet you still pay taxes to the boss and equip the younger brother with a war horse! There is no mention of revenge for more than 100 chapters, especially the 20 chapters that were recently updated. I was confused and didn't know what the protagonist was going to do. There was no main plot anymore, every word was messed up, here and there! It's true that the author can't or doesn't want to write eunuchs! This is getting more and more confusing. What else is interesting about this book?

Little puppy, this, this,,,,,

First of all, in ancient times, if you built a building that was too high, you had to be beheaded! The word transcendence is used throughout ancient and modern times! No matter how rich you are, the highest status is stipulated by law! Second, for yeast-raised dough, just leave a piece of dough and add it next time it rises, so you don't need yeast! Don't say they don't understand! There is always a first to try everything

It started out okay, but the more I wrote, the messier it became. They also directly grabbed the territory. If you are going against Li Shimin, are you going to kill Li Shimin and make yourself the emperor? . 😨😨

Great, old bookworms like this style

If you don't know how to make cold, what kind of refrigerator should you buy? To write a historical article, what is required to study history; In the feudal dynasty, what are you afraid of challenging the emperor? The ancient people had the ability to accept things beyond their times; When writing a novel, why should we listen to readers' opinions? If the food is not delicious, it must be a problem with your own tongue. Could it also be a problem with the chef? You are a chef or he is a chef. If you have not cooked, why should you say that the chef's food is not delicious?