My Extraordinary Enchantment
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On the ruins, Chu Yuange looked at his hands and fell into deep thought. [A pair of hands, my mother's product 18 years ago] Quietly, the light in the hands disappeared. [A pair of hands, my mother's product 18 years ago, hand speed +1, picking up leaks +1...] Chu Yuange finally breathed a sigh of relief. There must be no one who picks up trash faster than me! PS: Attention! It's not a purely cool article, but it's not abusive either!
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Official(9)Scraped 21d ago
Is the writing bad or something?
What you wrote makes people refuse to read it. Let me talk about 2 points: 1 is that when you enchant your hand, you will stop reading it after the enchantment is completed, and you will forcibly lower your IQ. 2. People are ready to kill you. The article says that you can leave, but you still save them. What you wrote is about ruins. At the beginning, you said that the ruins mean that the people closest to you don't trust them. They are all bandits, but there is still order in the town. To put it this way, the radical thing is that the person who killed the protagonist's parents, wife, and children still cooperated. Discourage them directly. Personally, I hope it can be reworked, such as letting the protagonist travel from modern civilization through the ruins. In this way, the protagonist's IQ is online.
Let me ask a little question about Chapter 53
Ordinary people live near the lighthouse. When entering the wasteland, they need to take medicine, otherwise they will become decaying bodies. So how do these robbers survive? The previous medicines were only effective for a day. Do the robbers have so many medicines? Not to mention that they are still in charge of a market town, so how much medicine is enough? I hope the author can make it more reasonable.
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Can your possessed protagonist be written as a time traveler? No common sense
I just read eight chapters and let me know what I think.
As far as the eight chapters I read are concerned, in the apocalypse of the wasteland, a survey corps that can go out in a market town has no attempt to survive in the wild? ? ? In the wild, he is like a fool, even worse than those in the slums who have no ability. Wouldn't a market town like this be wiped out in minutes? ? What you write is just to set off the protagonist. Except for the protagonist, everyone else is a fool. You might as well just write it as a cool article. You can say that the people in the market town are useless, but as a corps that can go out, they are so useless. I really don't know how you will write about it later. You just have to rely on the protagonist to pretend.
Author, you have already taken all the leave for the next life. Next, give me a good code word update. Do you understand?
It's okay, the shortcomings are obvious, but the routine is good
It sucks, but the content is good. I'll give it five stars.
I especially hope the author can continue writing
Why don't you code again (/ω＼)~? ? ? ? ?
Where is the author? Have you coded a chapter and stopped coding?
The author's words are a bit unreasonable. I will update this day one day. In the next two days of the Lantern Festival, there may be another
Broke, I just opened a new one, and I saw that there is an event that has not been completed and has been pushed for two days. It seems a bit unreliable.
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Official(9)Scraped 21d ago
Is the writing bad or something?
What you wrote makes people refuse to read it. Let me talk about 2 points: 1 is that when you enchant your hand, you will stop reading it after the enchantment is completed, and you will forcibly lower your IQ. 2. People are ready to kill you. The article says that you can leave, but you still save them. What you wrote is about ruins. At the beginning, you said that the ruins mean that the people closest to you don't trust them. They are all bandits, but there is still order in the town. To put it this way, the radical thing is that the person who killed the protagonist's parents, wife, and children still cooperated. Discourage them directly. Personally, I hope it can be reworked, such as letting the protagonist travel from modern civilization through the ruins. In this way, the protagonist's IQ is online.
Let me ask a little question about Chapter 53
Ordinary people live near the lighthouse. When entering the wasteland, they need to take medicine, otherwise they will become decaying bodies. So how do these robbers survive? The previous medicines were only effective for a day. Do the robbers have so many medicines? Not to mention that they are still in charge of a market town, so how much medicine is enough? I hope the author can make it more reasonable.
. .
Can your possessed protagonist be written as a time traveler? No common sense
I just read eight chapters and let me know what I think.
As far as the eight chapters I read are concerned, in the apocalypse of the wasteland, a survey corps that can go out in a market town has no attempt to survive in the wild? ? ? In the wild, he is like a fool, even worse than those in the slums who have no ability. Wouldn't a market town like this be wiped out in minutes? ? What you write is just to set off the protagonist. Except for the protagonist, everyone else is a fool. You might as well just write it as a cool article. You can say that the people in the market town are useless, but as a corps that can go out, they are so useless. I really don't know how you will write about it later. You just have to rely on the protagonist to pretend.
Author, you have already taken all the leave for the next life. Next, give me a good code word update. Do you understand?
It's okay, the shortcomings are obvious, but the routine is good
It sucks, but the content is good. I'll give it five stars.
I especially hope the author can continue writing
Why don't you code again (/ω＼)~? ? ? ? ?
Where is the author? Have you coded a chapter and stopped coding?
The author's words are a bit unreasonable. I will update this day one day. In the next two days of the Lantern Festival, there may be another
Broke, I just opened a new one, and I saw that there is an event that has not been completed and has been pushed for two days. It seems a bit unreliable.
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