Ten Rings World

This is the first new book, and it must have a lot of bad points, but the only good thing is that the original is not plagiarized, and it is okay to collect it naked every day. Of course, it is very good for a newcomer like me, and it is also the reason for me to keep writing. There must be progress every day. If there is anything wrong with the writing, please leave a message. I will adopt it if it makes sense and try not to appear in future chapters. Thank you, my friends.

The world view is vague and not clearly described. There is not enough preparation at the beginning. For example, before Chapter 1, you could write 10 chapters describing the world, which would make it look clearer. But the author didn't. He directly wrote the protagonist and started the exam. However, the author's writing method will make the readers feel disconnected and think that they have missed ten chapters. The content and plot transitions are also relatively blunt and look confusing. The rating will be deducted two stars based on the above 2 points. Others are considered qualified, neither excellent nor poor. It's quite satisfactory, and it's pretty good for reading new books on QQ. As long as there can be progress in the later stages, the foreshadowing and transitions are done well, and the plot can follow the author's own outline, then if this book can be completed normally and there are plans to write a novel later, then I can write one or two more books with similar themes, which should be able to accumulate some fans.

Even if you show it to me, don't stop, okay? I saw that another of your books was discontinued, so I am posting this comment. Don't discontinue it!

Very energetic! Come on! Keep up the good work!