Perfect Form

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The book is good but it's not my type. It's hard to accept that the heroine is not perfect.

The frame structure is good, but the content, especially emotions and cultivation, I can't see the conditions for becoming a peerless strongman. Without the belief and behavior to become a strong person, you are just forced to a dead end and rely on the halo of the protagonist to evolve proudly, without being able to think ahead and prepare. If you want a book to be well-received, it's not about the author writing whatever he thinks. A good book is not only an expression of the author's personal thoughts, but also needs the hearts of the public. Only by grasping the needs of the public can you get good reviews! Author, have you ever considered why famous authors such as "Tiancan Potato, I Eat Tomatoes, and Chen Dong" all write very well. Your writing level is quite high, but you definitely didn't listen to other people's opinions on the content. You should be more humorous, more decisive, and more proactive when writing, especially when writing about heroines. Is that because you feel good about yourself, but you are really a terrible writer? First of all, the novel must be comfortable for the public to read, and secondly, it must be enjoyable for the public to read. If the early stage of the novel is well written, why does it have to be twisted later on? If you, the author, could change the heroine, her training methods (remember that all masters are on a lonely path, instead of guarding the fortress all day long, they should take the initiative), and at the same time, you should have goals in doing things (if you want your parents to live well, you should give them evolution agents. It is useless for a good man to be around all the time), as well as the heroine. How many readers abandoned the book because of the heroine? In short, you should be able to let your friends read and give opinions, instead of living in your own personal world and only expressing your own emotions and thoughts. Um... Well written about the matter of the universe! I hope the author can change it again. I think it will be very good if it is changed!

Thanks to the author for his continuous persistence. Among the vast number of books, I found one that I read and was very happy. I hope you can continue to write books, and I hope you can persevere and not be defeated by life. Come on!

Is Du Zheng the protagonist or Li Li the protagonist? Why does it feel like the protagonist is always doing useless things? I'm speechless.

The more I watch, the more I feel like the protagonist is Du Zheng.

I feel like this dad is a bit too fake. It's true that rural people are honest, but that doesn't mean they are fools.

A comfortable life, the outbreak of disaster, meeting Li Wanpan in the apocalypse, then falling in love with Li Wanpan, until Li Wanpan died, and then Li Li refused to face powerful enemies in order to save Li Wanpan, dared to challenge, did not face hardships, successfully entered the ranks of super life forms, created another earth, waited for hundreds of millions of years, just to save Li Wanpan, and almost died in the earth he created, just because he did not belong to the three-dimensional universe Until they met Li Wanpan, the two of them could not be together and waited for hundreds of millions of years. After all, it was nothingness... I still like your novels very much, they are touching and inspirational Push it, push it, push it, push it ten thousand times

The audience hopes to read exciting stories and hopes that the protagonist is a perfect existence. This goes against the author's original intention, so the book's performance is not good. You can't rely on writing to make a living. When later writing conflicts with real life, you can only sacrifice the later content of the novel. It makes it look a bit messed up in the later stages. This book could have become a masterpiece in the apocalyptic genre, but it should be said that it lost to reality. I think the concept is perfect, and the setting of the protagonist can be said to have both advantages and disadvantages. The disadvantage can be said that the main character is poorly written and there is no invincible novel, so the book has a small audience and the book's performance is also disappointing. The advantage is also that this tragic ending makes more people think deeply about and remember this book. Because short-form articles can only make the audience forget about reading one book. I still remember the plot of this book a year after reading it.

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