Start by Creating a World

I either recommend it or complain about it. I deleted it after a few days. It's okay, but there is a problem. The protagonist is a bit childish and greasy. Within 30 chapters, there are thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi... (This is completely a standard quotation for elementary school students. I read it over and over again and was speechless. Did you write Long Aotian?) The biggest bug is that the protagonist thinks he is very low-key. Obviously he is. Doing these things openly (the protagonist made a series of actions in the creation of the world, basically without covering up) The key is that the protagonist was still weak at that time. When someone came to him, I was not interested in watching it and didn't want to know how to deal with it. (It was mainly the behind-the-scenes flow that I watched for the first time. It was still a science fiction article that I was more interested in, so I insisted on reading 30 chapters) (4 points)