Travel Through the Future and Be the Savior
by Looking Forward To Spring With Lingering Snow
About This Novel
Leng Mou accidentally picked up a treasure, and thus started the destiny of traveling back and forth between the future and reality to save the world.
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
Open a new book
A new book has been opened, and all book friends are here to help and support!
The writing of the book is okay, but the content is somewhat lacking.
I just read your book. In the first chapter, the plot drags on. It could have happened earlier or happened to enhance the plot. Second, you have no highlights. The lack of highlights leads to the lack of desire to read further. You have a system, but you have not begun to explain the advantages and highlights of the system. It is useless to keep delaying the plot. The structure of the novel is the sum of the plots of the protagonists. The protagonist's plot is important, don't write too many sub-plots. People nowadays don't have the patience to read the word "water" in novels. They like to feel more relaxed. I hope you can adopt my suggestion
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
Open a new book
A new book has been opened, and all book friends are here to help and support!
The writing of the book is okay, but the content is somewhat lacking.
I just read your book. In the first chapter, the plot drags on. It could have happened earlier or happened to enhance the plot. Second, you have no highlights. The lack of highlights leads to the lack of desire to read further. You have a system, but you have not begun to explain the advantages and highlights of the system. It is useless to keep delaying the plot. The structure of the novel is the sum of the plots of the protagonists. The protagonist's plot is important, don't write too many sub-plots. People nowadays don't have the patience to read the word "water" in novels. They like to feel more relaxed. I hope you can adopt my suggestion
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