
The Place Where Gods and Demons Evolve
About This Novel
Reborn in a parallel world, I originally thought I would change my future life with my knowledge. But this life, the end of the world, really happened. Auroras, meteorites, and the entire world have undergone earth-shaking changes. Various mutated creatures followed one after another. Kill monsters, gain abilities, and evolve and mutate!
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Give some personal suggestions
First of all, the protagonist of a post-apocalyptic novel should be cold-blooded, abandon kindness, and have humanity, but should not be soft-hearted. For example, the protagonist was attacked by the two people at the door just after he joined the first survivor group. The protagonist said that if he had not upgraded, he might have been injured, and he would definitely be killed. I don't understand why the protagonist didn't just kill them. Although he did kill them later, the protagonist never took the initiative to kill people. They were all forced. These can reflect the soft-hearted character of the protagonist. If he was not the protagonist, he might have died long ago. Since he is the protagonist, he should be more ruthless, which makes it more comfortable to watch. Second, the middle-class girl at the beginning was also very powerful. Normally, the protagonist should have been killed by her at that time. Maybe the author forced her to have a crush on the protagonist. It is really better not to have such an emotional scene. The heroine is not too semen Third, the protagonist is too weak. There are many who are stronger than the protagonist. The middle-aged girl is a lone ranger, but she is stronger than the protagonist. When killing the three-headed monster, she chopped off the last head with one knife. The protagonist was dying before he was killed. As soon as she appeared, she was killed. Logically speaking, the last one should be the strongest, but she was killed with one knife! Wouldn't this make her invincible if she leveled up? On the other hand, the protagonist's IQ is also very low. When I see her, I am reminded to be careful of threats. 😂 She looks a bit mentally retarded, but I feel that Qian Ruomeng is okay and more natural. Fourth, the protagonist should not have joined that group in the first place. It is really of no use and he was mercilessly ridiculed. If it were me, in the end of the world, I would just kill his classmate Lin Dong and that other person directly. The protagonist can completely go it alone. I am very surprised how the middle school girl can reach the silver level faster than the protagonist. The protagonist's upgrade is really It's a slow speed. People get to Silver for no reason, but the protagonist is still wandering around in Bronze. For example, there are 10 Silver in the city of the protagonist. When the protagonist is still Bronze, there are thousands in China, and tens of thousands in the world is not too much. The protagonist's strength is surpassed at the beginning, and it is impossible to catch up later, because the stronger, the faster the upgrade. Fifth, the protagonist's extremely rare ability at the beginning really has no sense of expression. There is no sign of strength. On the contrary, it is not as strong as others in killing monsters. I don't believe that the second middle school girl also has this ability. Even if there is a protagonist, it shouldn't be so weak. In short, the protagonist is weak and slow to upgrade, and others become stronger inexplicably, even more powerful than the protagonist's aura. The protagonist has a kind personality, is not decisive in doing things, and does not like to kill people, that is, he does not hate. The protagonist's emotional scenes are not well written. It is better if the relationship is strange. The protagonist should work alone in the end of the world and can take on a younger brother. There is no need to be someone else's younger brother. These are completely my personal suggestions. If you feel uncomfortable after reading it, the author can read it or not. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I'm not saying the writing is bad. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion.
A must-read for the author
Author! I stopped following your God-Level Upgrade System when you charged money for it. The God-Level Upgrade System was the first book I read, and it also sparked my interest in the novel world. I hope this book is free of charge.
nice
I originally thought that the title was a mindless upgrade article with poor writing style and mediocre vocabulary. Unexpectedly, after reading a few chapters, I found that it was completely different. The author's writing style is very good, and there is nothing too poisonous. The women he describes are not charming and alluring, and they look fake at first glance. Instead, the descriptions are very real, and his character traits are vividly displayed on the page. Qian Ruomeng left a deep impression on me. The protagonist is not a virgin, does not kill people randomly, and is not as soft-hearted and kind-hearted as the teacher named Tang Zhen. The supporting characters in the author's works are not the kind who will act blindly or provoke the protagonist when they see them. The supporting characters are also powerful and can be on par with the protagonist, and some are stronger than the protagonist. This requires the protagonist to continue to become stronger. It's a very interesting book. I like it. Keep up the good work, author!
Have you noticed that today's villains are: strong in ability, have clear goals, are calm when faced with problems, have clear ideas in doing things, pursue their dreams while striving to enrich themselves and improve their combat effectiveness, often face difficulties with a smile, do not give up easily, are strict with themselves, and do not approach women. The current protagonist: Muddle along all day long, will only work hard when he meets a strong enemy, will only yell when encountering difficulties (break it for me, one type), has a troubled face, is addicted to women, has no clear goals, depends entirely on the system for improvement, easily gives up on himself, and needs encouragement (harem, gay friends, golden fingers, etc.) To revive his spirit
Make complaints
The protagonist feels useless. As a protagonist, he is only ranked 95th in a small town. With so many cities in a country, it seems that he is ranked in the millions at most. Globally, there is one person who is ranked in the hundreds of millions. Is this considered waste?
Realistic version of Sword Art Online death game
Will you only be able to explode skills and not anything else? What about equipment, materials, and pet eggs? In online games, monsters are killed mainly by exploding equipment and money, but here, you only kill monsters by exploding skills, without any equipment at all, and you rely entirely on buying them in the mall. It feels like equipment is more valuable than skills. And there are too many skills. It feels like a waste to break down a bunch of skills. Acquire multiple cherished skills. It is also wasted because the skill slot is not enough. There can't be one special skill that combines multiple skills.
The author's writing style is really good. These books are all very beautiful. I highly recommend them.
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In the Lingxiao Palace, Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor caressed the male and female swords and sighed: "When I gave you this natal magic weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much... After all, you were just a straw mat seller at the time and didn't have much money to buy materials." He stared at Xuande deeply and found that he really couldn't see through him. ... Compared with Xuanyuan Sword, it's just a tiny bit behind! " Xuande remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish. "Awesome! Awesome! " Qihuo clicked his tongue and praised, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword? " Xuande was silent. He knew all this. "But..." The Jade Emperor changed the subject, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! ... Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with the five original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword. The Jade Emperor looked at Xuande, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but say that these five divine flames are the Crystal Flame, Hunyuan Flame, Wind Falling Flame, Tianxing Flame and Sith Flame. Except for the first one that I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang had them! You understand? Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly, "I have all the last four. ... I'm just missing the first one." The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. How is that possible! ? Those four divine flames... How could he have them! ? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame?" Xuande nodded and said, "Yes, I came here just for the water experience." Bo Jun smiled.
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The protagonist is a bit useless
What about the reborn ones? At the same time, the protagonist evolves so slowly. If you don't work hard to hunt monsters, joining any team is a waste of time.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(275)Scraped 20d ago
Give some personal suggestions
First of all, the protagonist of a post-apocalyptic novel should be cold-blooded, abandon kindness, and have humanity, but should not be soft-hearted. For example, the protagonist was attacked by the two people at the door just after he joined the first survivor group. The protagonist said that if he had not upgraded, he might have been injured, and he would definitely be killed. I don't understand why the protagonist didn't just kill them. Although he did kill them later, the protagonist never took the initiative to kill people. They were all forced. These can reflect the soft-hearted character of the protagonist. If he was not the protagonist, he might have died long ago. Since he is the protagonist, he should be more ruthless, which makes it more comfortable to watch. Second, the middle-class girl at the beginning was also very powerful. Normally, the protagonist should have been killed by her at that time. Maybe the author forced her to have a crush on the protagonist. It is really better not to have such an emotional scene. The heroine is not too semen Third, the protagonist is too weak. There are many who are stronger than the protagonist. The middle-aged girl is a lone ranger, but she is stronger than the protagonist. When killing the three-headed monster, she chopped off the last head with one knife. The protagonist was dying before he was killed. As soon as she appeared, she was killed. Logically speaking, the last one should be the strongest, but she was killed with one knife! Wouldn't this make her invincible if she leveled up? On the other hand, the protagonist's IQ is also very low. When I see her, I am reminded to be careful of threats. 😂 She looks a bit mentally retarded, but I feel that Qian Ruomeng is okay and more natural. Fourth, the protagonist should not have joined that group in the first place. It is really of no use and he was mercilessly ridiculed. If it were me, in the end of the world, I would just kill his classmate Lin Dong and that other person directly. The protagonist can completely go it alone. I am very surprised how the middle school girl can reach the silver level faster than the protagonist. The protagonist's upgrade is really It's a slow speed. People get to Silver for no reason, but the protagonist is still wandering around in Bronze. For example, there are 10 Silver in the city of the protagonist. When the protagonist is still Bronze, there are thousands in China, and tens of thousands in the world is not too much. The protagonist's strength is surpassed at the beginning, and it is impossible to catch up later, because the stronger, the faster the upgrade. Fifth, the protagonist's extremely rare ability at the beginning really has no sense of expression. There is no sign of strength. On the contrary, it is not as strong as others in killing monsters. I don't believe that the second middle school girl also has this ability. Even if there is a protagonist, it shouldn't be so weak. In short, the protagonist is weak and slow to upgrade, and others become stronger inexplicably, even more powerful than the protagonist's aura. The protagonist has a kind personality, is not decisive in doing things, and does not like to kill people, that is, he does not hate. The protagonist's emotional scenes are not well written. It is better if the relationship is strange. The protagonist should work alone in the end of the world and can take on a younger brother. There is no need to be someone else's younger brother. These are completely my personal suggestions. If you feel uncomfortable after reading it, the author can read it or not. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I'm not saying the writing is bad. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion.
A must-read for the author
Author! I stopped following your God-Level Upgrade System when you charged money for it. The God-Level Upgrade System was the first book I read, and it also sparked my interest in the novel world. I hope this book is free of charge.
nice
I originally thought that the title was a mindless upgrade article with poor writing style and mediocre vocabulary. Unexpectedly, after reading a few chapters, I found that it was completely different. The author's writing style is very good, and there is nothing too poisonous. The women he describes are not charming and alluring, and they look fake at first glance. Instead, the descriptions are very real, and his character traits are vividly displayed on the page. Qian Ruomeng left a deep impression on me. The protagonist is not a virgin, does not kill people randomly, and is not as soft-hearted and kind-hearted as the teacher named Tang Zhen. The supporting characters in the author's works are not the kind who will act blindly or provoke the protagonist when they see them. The supporting characters are also powerful and can be on par with the protagonist, and some are stronger than the protagonist. This requires the protagonist to continue to become stronger. It's a very interesting book. I like it. Keep up the good work, author!
Have you noticed that today's villains are: strong in ability, have clear goals, are calm when faced with problems, have clear ideas in doing things, pursue their dreams while striving to enrich themselves and improve their combat effectiveness, often face difficulties with a smile, do not give up easily, are strict with themselves, and do not approach women. The current protagonist: Muddle along all day long, will only work hard when he meets a strong enemy, will only yell when encountering difficulties (break it for me, one type), has a troubled face, is addicted to women, has no clear goals, depends entirely on the system for improvement, easily gives up on himself, and needs encouragement (harem, gay friends, golden fingers, etc.) To revive his spirit
Make complaints
The protagonist feels useless. As a protagonist, he is only ranked 95th in a small town. With so many cities in a country, it seems that he is ranked in the millions at most. Globally, there is one person who is ranked in the hundreds of millions. Is this considered waste?
Realistic version of Sword Art Online death game
Will you only be able to explode skills and not anything else? What about equipment, materials, and pet eggs? In online games, monsters are killed mainly by exploding equipment and money, but here, you only kill monsters by exploding skills, without any equipment at all, and you rely entirely on buying them in the mall. It feels like equipment is more valuable than skills. And there are too many skills. It feels like a waste to break down a bunch of skills. Acquire multiple cherished skills. It is also wasted because the skill slot is not enough. There can't be one special skill that combines multiple skills.
The author's writing style is really good. These books are all very beautiful. I highly recommend them.
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In the Lingxiao Palace, Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor caressed the male and female swords and sighed: "When I gave you this natal magic weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much... After all, you were just a straw mat seller at the time and didn't have much money to buy materials." He stared at Xuande deeply and found that he really couldn't see through him. ... Compared with Xuanyuan Sword, it's just a tiny bit behind! " Xuande remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish. "Awesome! Awesome! " Qihuo clicked his tongue and praised, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword? " Xuande was silent. He knew all this. "But..." The Jade Emperor changed the subject, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! ... Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with the five original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword. The Jade Emperor looked at Xuande, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but say that these five divine flames are the Crystal Flame, Hunyuan Flame, Wind Falling Flame, Tianxing Flame and Sith Flame. Except for the first one that I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang had them! You understand? Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly, "I have all the last four. ... I'm just missing the first one." The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. How is that possible! ? Those four divine flames... How could he have them! ? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame?" Xuande nodded and said, "Yes, I came here just for the water experience." Bo Jun smiled.
Which genius can find a wooden experience, haha😄
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The protagonist is a bit useless
What about the reborn ones? At the same time, the protagonist evolves so slowly. If you don't work hard to hunt monsters, joining any team is a waste of time.









