
Mortals: Travel to Prove Immortality
by A Pig At The Foot Of The Mountain
About This Novel
Lin Feng panicked when Dr. Mo took notice of his senior brother who traveled through time and became Han Li. The travel system is online! Complete a tour to get rewards. "A seven-day trip to Tainan Xiaohui will reward you with a bottle of pill!" "A half-month trip to the Bloody Forbidden Land will reward you with a foundation-building pill!" With his understanding of the plot, Lin Feng seized the opportunity. "Junior brother Han, would you like to go on the seven-day tour of Xutian? There are many treasures there, as well as the elixir to break through the Nascent Soul!" "Old ghost Xiang, can you go on the one-month tour of the spiritual world?" "Baohua, the fairy world is so beautiful, let's go travel together!"
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Official(43)Scraped 21d ago
What rubbish! ! ! !
At the beginning, the thousand-year elixir was exchanged for some miscellaneous talismans and magic weapons! ! ! ! Those who have traveled through time know the plot! ! ! There is no difference between him and a fool! As soon as you arrive, you need to practice physical skills! ! I just don't understand! ! ! You know what you look like and you still practice! If you want money but no money, you need no brains! Also learn from others, Han Li! At least other people know how to improve their realm first! ***Practice as soon as you get up!
Nangong Wan tried to kill the protagonist over and over again, but the protagonist repaid the protagonist with evil and looked cheerful, so I shouldn't have had any expectations. From Nangong Wan's attempt to rob the protagonist and Han Li for the elixir, and his hand was accidentally blown off, to when he walked out of the secret realm to hand over the elixir, the other sect wanted to give up the bet and exchange the two protagonists, and then when the protagonist walked out of the sect, he met Nangong Wan and took the initiative to seek revenge and rob the protagonist again. At this time, when encountering the secret affairs of the Demonic Sect and encountering a crisis, the protagonist happily saved Nangong Wan and teleported her away with her. I laughed, I really died laughing. The protagonist is a human being. I can't figure it out. Is this a human being? Friends, tell me, is this really a person?
After seeing Pao Baohua, you immediately abandoned the book. Do you think the Holy Ancestor of the Demon Clan is a good man and a believer? Not afraid of backstabbing?
The protagonist is so stupid that he can't survive more than three days as a mortal
I feel that the protagonist is too promiscuous, especially during the auction before attending the Fresh Food Conference, which directly led to three foundation-building monks coming to rob the protagonist. I still can't get used to such a profligate. Even if you can teleport, you have to teleport before his attack hits you. Aren't you afraid that a super awesome person will come and hit you? Even if you have teleportation, it's useless.
How come such a rubbish book has such a high rating?
This protagonist is an idiot, looking for trouble to die.
Every time I see the beginning of Body Refining, I can't stand it anymore. Have you read the original work? Both Han Li and Yuanying monks had to go to Dajin to find body training techniques. You had them at the beginning of Tiannan. When Tiannan fought against Mulan, which one was for physical training? Except for those supporting magic weapons that overdraft the body, the body refiner will die after using it once.
I** finally managed to get a Spirit-accumulating Fruit in the system, but you gave it to Mo Caihuan directly and generously and gave her an Ice Spirit Root. You are so generous. What kind of rubbish did you have? You gave it to others as soon as it was a good reward. It said that it can cultivate your own spiritual roots, so the effect is probably not worse than the Sky-Building Pill. You gave it directly to Mo Caihuan. What kind of relationship does she have with you? We have met her a few times. Just because she wants to cultivate immortality, you just gave it to her. You are so generous.
The Bloody Forbidden Land has been open for five days in total, half a month. Are you already inside?
This is my first review, and I have read the whole book. If I can read the whole book, it means that this fanfic is quite attractive, and the content is relatively novel and interesting. It would be better if you can talk about the humanities and things encountered in various walks of life in more detail. Unfortunately, it only ends with Ascension to the Immortal World, and Han Li and the others did not explain it clearly.
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Official(43)Scraped 21d ago
What rubbish! ! ! !
At the beginning, the thousand-year elixir was exchanged for some miscellaneous talismans and magic weapons! ! ! ! Those who have traveled through time know the plot! ! ! There is no difference between him and a fool! As soon as you arrive, you need to practice physical skills! ! I just don't understand! ! ! You know what you look like and you still practice! If you want money but no money, you need no brains! Also learn from others, Han Li! At least other people know how to improve their realm first! ***Practice as soon as you get up!
Nangong Wan tried to kill the protagonist over and over again, but the protagonist repaid the protagonist with evil and looked cheerful, so I shouldn't have had any expectations. From Nangong Wan's attempt to rob the protagonist and Han Li for the elixir, and his hand was accidentally blown off, to when he walked out of the secret realm to hand over the elixir, the other sect wanted to give up the bet and exchange the two protagonists, and then when the protagonist walked out of the sect, he met Nangong Wan and took the initiative to seek revenge and rob the protagonist again. At this time, when encountering the secret affairs of the Demonic Sect and encountering a crisis, the protagonist happily saved Nangong Wan and teleported her away with her. I laughed, I really died laughing. The protagonist is a human being. I can't figure it out. Is this a human being? Friends, tell me, is this really a person?
After seeing Pao Baohua, you immediately abandoned the book. Do you think the Holy Ancestor of the Demon Clan is a good man and a believer? Not afraid of backstabbing?
The protagonist is so stupid that he can't survive more than three days as a mortal
I feel that the protagonist is too promiscuous, especially during the auction before attending the Fresh Food Conference, which directly led to three foundation-building monks coming to rob the protagonist. I still can't get used to such a profligate. Even if you can teleport, you have to teleport before his attack hits you. Aren't you afraid that a super awesome person will come and hit you? Even if you have teleportation, it's useless.
How come such a rubbish book has such a high rating?
This protagonist is an idiot, looking for trouble to die.
Every time I see the beginning of Body Refining, I can't stand it anymore. Have you read the original work? Both Han Li and Yuanying monks had to go to Dajin to find body training techniques. You had them at the beginning of Tiannan. When Tiannan fought against Mulan, which one was for physical training? Except for those supporting magic weapons that overdraft the body, the body refiner will die after using it once.
I** finally managed to get a Spirit-accumulating Fruit in the system, but you gave it to Mo Caihuan directly and generously and gave her an Ice Spirit Root. You are so generous. What kind of rubbish did you have? You gave it to others as soon as it was a good reward. It said that it can cultivate your own spiritual roots, so the effect is probably not worse than the Sky-Building Pill. You gave it directly to Mo Caihuan. What kind of relationship does she have with you? We have met her a few times. Just because she wants to cultivate immortality, you just gave it to her. You are so generous.
The Bloody Forbidden Land has been open for five days in total, half a month. Are you already inside?
This is my first review, and I have read the whole book. If I can read the whole book, it means that this fanfic is quite attractive, and the content is relatively novel and interesting. It would be better if you can talk about the humanities and things encountered in various walks of life in more detail. Unfortunately, it only ends with Ascension to the Immortal World, and Han Li and the others did not explain it clearly.









