Zhetian: Witnessing Emperor Huangtian Becoming an Immortal at the Beginning

Hmm... To be honest, author, I don't quite understand what you want to write. I've been reading it for so long, but I still can't figure out what the core and theme of your book are. It makes me feel very confused and foggy. The protagonist makes me feel very confused, like a puppet with no purpose? Hmm... If this is the core of your book, I think there is a high probability that you will not be able to continue writing it. It is okay to write it for yourself, but if it is written for readers... Believe me, no one will be able to read it.

Looking at what the author wrote, it seems that it is easy to become a Red Dust Immortal. There are only a few Red Dust Immortals in the trilogy, and the only known ninth generation Red Dust Immortals are Huang Yechu and three others. You are so easy to make ninth or even tenth generation Red Dust Immortals, it seems that the ninth generation Red Dust Immortal is cheap and easy to achieve, and you are still ten times red. The Chen Immortal is far superior to the Nine Worlds of the Red Dust Immortal. What you call the Ten Paths are similar to those of Duan De who constantly rebuild the ten evolution paths of the Ten Worlds. If several evolutionary paths of fellow cultivators are far stronger than one, then there are far more than ten evolutionary paths. There is no such person who is stronger than Huang Yechu, who was born in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths.

It would be great if I could just come to a hundred chapters, hehe

You actually expect Emperor Huangtian to save you in the boundless starry sky. You might as well expect him to kill you. It's really funny.

The writing is okay, but it's too watery. 70% Of the plot is watery. If you keep going like this, just subscribe and delete the book as soon as it's released. It's too watery. If you subscribe, you won't see much useful information. It's not worth it.

In this life, Dao Heng's lifespan has skyrocketed again, extending by a full 20,000 years compared to the third life! "If this continues, when will I be able to complete the immortal road in the world of mortals?" Dao Heng whispered to himself. He discovered that the biggest obstacle on the road to mortal immortality was not the method of living out the next life again and again, but his own longer and longer lifespan!

I was really convinced when I saw the sentence "Shi Hao is just a creator of magic. He knows shit about how to cover the sky."

How about not talking about the book? How about saying that the Kunlun Immortal Land was not created by Emperor Zun and Duan De in the mythical era? And the time when Huang became an immortal should have come from the ancient and modern land. You are a bit...

The title really attracted me. . . . . This content?

The idea is good, but the characters are not clear and the description of the complex is a bit watery.