I Prove My Immortality by My Talent

You can read it in Shuhuang, add q to the starting point I've ordered the full version and I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 189. Disadvantages: The protagonist and others have been bragging about his perfect state of mind. In my opinion, he is far inferior to Xiao Yu in "Is This a Cultivation of Immortality". I think the biggest problem with that book is that it is borderline. Also, there was a big setback for the protagonist and Yao (a female character), but a golden elixir escaped from the fairy sword and died later. The protagonist used the pure Yang magic power accumulated by Luochen Temple for thousands of years to prevent Huang Mei from being killed (Luochen Temple had a Yuanying, and Huang Mei was also a Yuanying). You can say that the Great Dao Fifty Days plays the role of Forty-nine, the Yuanying realm is very strong and it is not easy to die, but I still feel very strange. There is also a lack of preparation by the writer and forced creation of conflicts. Why does something happen to the protagonist when he travels to other small sects? You can also say that something happened to the small sect, but the protagonist broke through it, but this kind of forcibly creating conflicts is still a bit awkward. August Flying Eagle did a good job in this regard. For details, see "The Holy Master"

There is nothing interesting after entering the inner door. There is a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. There is no main line.

It needs to be carefully divided into different realms, otherwise the realm will suddenly appear when you watch it and you won't know how to divide it.

How to say it? I haven't seen much of it, and there are two main problems. First, the male protagonist has no opinion. The teacher told the male protagonist what he should learn, but the male protagonist really only learns these. Did the male protagonist and the author forget that the male protagonist has a problem? Since he has a problem, he cannot completely listen to the teacher (after all, only he knows what he has). Second, the fighting skills and experience are written in a very average way, which overwhelms the combat effectiveness. I don't know if the author deliberately wrote each Dharma Sutra in order to reduce his fighting power. He sees different people and comprehends different skills. This is a very good setting in itself. The premise is that the male protagonist really comprehends good skills (it does not require the male protagonist to comprehend awesome skills), but at least the skills are systematic (), and there must be several good fusion skills, but there are not many, so what can such a good setting become.

Last year, I was swayed by several authors and watched them queue up to enter the "Ouchi Recruitment Office"! So much so that when I saw this book on the shelves, I never dared to subscribe or post a recommendation... To be honest, it's not that the author's writing is not good. I was just afraid that the number of words would be too short and I would stop updating. My friend said that I had run out of "milk"... Now, um~ it's actually just one sentence. Come on, author! You must give "I Yiliu" a voice! ! !

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The writing is good, classic fairy tale plus golden finger

Is he the author of "I Use Spiritual Treasures to Forge Immortality"? I hope this book can be finished That book is quite nice

The level of talent is sometimes high and sometimes low. It's not easy to adapt to the situation. The level of talent is also unreasonable. You can't start with the same skill in every skill.

The article is unique, fresh and refined, and is different from existing articles on immortality, but it is a little slow.