Start Liver Skill from Skeleton

First of all, the setting of the novel is okay and somewhat interesting. The shortcomings are the writing, plot, characterization and main line. Normal novels rely on characters to promote plot development and plots to shape characters. But the plot of this book is a plot, the characters are characters, and there is almost no overlap between the two. There is an abrupt feeling that one thought comes out one after another, and the plot is stiff and incoherent. There is almost no shaping of the characters. The author also has problems with the rhythm. The plot in the game part is boring and lengthy, and the plot in the real part is abrupt and abrupt. After reading dozens of chapters, the background and main plot of the novel are still unclear, like the kind of work you start writing immediately without an outline. Logically speaking, these are all common problems for new authors, but I looked at the author's homepage and found that he is an experienced author with seven or eight books, but this level is really not what it should be.

This book written by the author is good in the first half, but not in the second half. I wish the author would rewrite and fill in the many blank spaces.

The plot is not good. All the protagonist's friends have seen the true image. How can they believe the protagonist? The protagonist will definitely be exposed and may be dissected. The plot is not good.

Come on, it suits my taste very well, keep up the good work